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![]() Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 33,009 | Is it too much? My mood soon changes, Anger starts to spread. I'm sitting here thinking, Where did I go wrong? I was sitting here crying, Asking you for help. Instead I felt so stupid, Talking in a different language. I was looking for support, Opening up to you. But instead I got a cold chill, Brushes away, out of sight. Was what I did so wrong? Was it too much to ask?
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,138 | Re: Is it to much? Hmmm...simple and straight to the point.. nicely written.. ^^ i suggest some methaphores make it sassier~! xD |
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![]() Credits: 4,734 | Re: Is it to much? Wow D you have alot of confusion there wish I was able to help like you helped me, good poem anyways.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 33,009 | Re: Is it to much? thank you both, When I get emotional I tend to write poems that are really straight to the point as I find it easier to just say how I feel and not try to cut corners.
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![]() Credits: 6,397 | .....Sazzy @.@ Wow, I love this poem! So much emotion of sadness and depression...I feel like that almost everytime I fight with my....bf... I hate the feeling when You quetion yourself but can't answer either... ![]() But I like the poem non the less! -x- Zainab -x-
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![]() ![]() Credits: 33,009 | Re: Is it to much? Quote:
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,978 | Re: Is it to much? I like this. The feeling it gave was very sincere. Im also enjoying the fact that your poems are on the shorter side, yet they all pack in quite a bit of emotion. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work. |
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Otaku | Re: Is it to much? That was sad feeling and lonely too how bad that? It's hard to feel lonely and that what make us start to ask too much ..This poem really short but in same time really awesome work so weel done Sazzy..^^
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![]() Credits: 49,365 | Re: Is it too much? Omg... who did that to you!? Who needs to get beaten up *takes a fork* and eaten up!!! Give that person to me!!!! Though that has inspired you to write this great poem. Very nice again- short, emotional and I could see myself in it... I could imagine myself sitting like that with anger building in me... my next step would be smashing the walls and throwing something outside the window (to hit his head)... Anyways... great, emotional work, I loved reading it and I hope to see more! ^^ EDIT: Sheesh I must read comments more carefully Quote:
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![]() ![]() Credits: 33,009 | Re: Is it too much? Thank you for your comment. Its something that has passes and won't be happening again. I just let my emotions get to me and I find writing poems is the only way to release that emotion.
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When my bf did a think like ignoring my sadness... I ended up saying sorry myself ![]() | |
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