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    Too Weak

    I thought I was strong.
    But I am proven wrong.
    I am weak.
    Too weak.

    Too weak to hope.
    Too weak to make expectations.
    Too weak to ask for favors.
    Because I know that I am to weak
    To endure anymore disapointment.

    Too weak to push someone away.
    Who makes me feel unsafe.
    Who makes me feel anxious, and affraid.
    Because most of the time...
    ... that someone is all I have.
    And Im too weak to be alone If I dont have to be.

    Too weak to care.
    About fatherless children.
    Childless fathers.
    Scorned lovers.
    Your pain,
    Or mine.
    I cant help.. You don't even want me to.
    Im too weak.
    Surely the world is strong enough
    To turn without me.
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    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Too Weak

    to weak ehh.....not really ur not to weak to write these strong powerfull poems keep it up peach♥daprincess
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Too Weak

    A great one we have here!!!! ^^ This poem is really great!!! I like it very much, because I understand what you mean when saying all those things...

    I really, really enjoyed reading this poem, this is my favourite of yours from now on ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Too Weak

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    A great one we have here!!!! ^^ This poem is really great!!! I like it very much, because I understand what you mean when saying all those things...

    I really, really enjoyed reading this poem, this is my favourite of yours from now on ^^
    Really? I just wrote it on the spur of the moment... heh... I'm thinking I may quit this whole "poet" thing.
    I just feel like I cant write when Im empty.
    I cant even think.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Too Weak

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Really? I just wrote it on the spur of the moment... heh... I'm thinking I may quit this whole "poet" thing.
    I just feel like I cant write when Im empty.
    I cant even think.
    I'm sure it's prety normal, it's the same with me... When you have a lot of emotions in you it's mush easier to write something really touching, that's normal.
    I really don't think you should quit because of that, it will change with time, you must be quite good to be able to write just because it's needed not because you feel like.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Too Weak

    life's little hells can be more than
    most can bare but there's always
    those times when you have to decide
    which is more important a fear that you
    be alone or the fear of being hurt by
    someone who dosnt care for you.

    alot of people go through a time where
    they feel the only thing that feels safe
    and normal are the times when they are
    hurt and over looked in just more than a
    physical manner , that fear of emptiness
    and despair can really be enough to drive
    anyone over the edge.

    when one only feel the bad things in life
    that's the only thing they know to be right
    even if it isn't , but for them to move on
    or to even see there situation as just a transition
    they have to feel secure in the fact that they are
    worth more to other than just a object.

    this poem is really awesome and the sadness
    and the unending cycle really cant be seen and
    felt and i like that.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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