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Reply With Quoteto weak ehh.....not really ur not to weak to write these strong powerfull poems keep it up peach♥daprincess
I thought I was strong.
But I am proven wrong.
I am weak.
Too weak.
Too weak to hope.
Too weak to make expectations.
Too weak to ask for favors.
Because I know that I am to weak
To endure anymore disapointment.
Too weak to push someone away.
Who makes me feel unsafe.
Who makes me feel anxious, and affraid.
Because most of the time...
... that someone is all I have.
And Im too weak to be alone If I dont have to be.
Too weak to care.
About fatherless children.
Childless fathers.
Scorned lovers.
Your pain,
Or mine.
I cant help.. You don't even want me to.
Im too weak.
Surely the world is strong enough
To turn without me.
Last edited by Peach_follows; Jun 24, 2007 at 01:11 PM.
... Not Ever Again...
to weak ehh.....not really ur not to weak to write these strong powerfull poems keep it up peach♥daprincess
Yeah, Bye.
A great one we have here!!!! ^^ This poem is really great!!! I like it very much, because I understand what you mean when saying all those things...
I really, really enjoyed reading this poem, this is my favourite of yours from now on ^^
Really? I just wrote it on the spur of the moment... heh... I'm thinking I may quit this whole "poet" thing.Originally Posted by Lasura
I just feel like I cant write when Im empty.
I cant even think.
... Not Ever Again...
I'm sure it's prety normal, it's the same with me... When you have a lot of emotions in you it's mush easier to write something really touching, that's normal.
I really don't think you should quit because of that, it will change with time, you must be quite good to be able to write just because it's needed not because you feel like.
life's little hells can be more than
most can bare but there's always
those times when you have to decide
which is more important a fear that you
be alone or the fear of being hurt by
someone who dosnt care for you.
alot of people go through a time where
they feel the only thing that feels safe
and normal are the times when they are
hurt and over looked in just more than a
physical manner , that fear of emptiness
and despair can really be enough to drive
anyone over the edge.
when one only feel the bad things in life
that's the only thing they know to be right
even if it isn't , but for them to move on
or to even see there situation as just a transition
they have to feel secure in the fact that they are
worth more to other than just a object.
this poem is really awesome and the sadness
and the unending cycle really cant be seen and
felt and i like that.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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