How could such a pain exist?
It's my fault
I did this
I caused you all such a great pain
I made you all cry for me
I made you all love me
Now I'm torn into pieces
Ripped apart by the jaws of love
How could I have done this?
I should just crush myself
With all my strength
Crush myself
Cuddling on a cow
Dreams don't exist
The pain thats there when your not around
All different yet all the same
My heart can't take this anymore
Who would have thought
Dying from being loved too much
Oh the pain
Oh sorrow
Let me die alone
The pain of loosing you
Is too much to bear
Just let me die
When I read this... It adds to my illusions of sorrow...
Can I request you something...? Can you put this line in your poem for me...
~I know I hurt you so bad,
And it breaks your heart...
It's not my intension to make you suffer...
But now, I'm crawling back to you...
whoa! its.... whoa! its good! it made me think of the way i see pain. good job!!
"... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."
thats great!! thank you!!
Sorry I cant really put that line in there.
Cause its not quite the situation everyone thinks it is
I see... This poem only tackles about someone whom suffers... But he/she never intends to come back... That's okay... It's only my request... Thank you anyways... I really appreciate your work...
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