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    Re: Torn between two worlds...

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    a very straight forward poem and i can relate to
    this with how i used to be torn but something
    happened that made My choice for me , my feelings
    were here and there blowing the direction of the wind.

    and for what to do all i can say is keep your head down
    till the storm passes if you know what i mean let things settles
    before looking up and see what damage was done and go and
    try to repair things , or you could be bold and face the storm
    and go to the new destination and let your heart land on new territory.

    thats what i say you should do but the poem as i siad is really good
    and it reminds me of how it was with me when i was torn and i hope
    your heart mends soon and the riped feeling goes away.
    Thanks for the advice. ^_^ And I'm glad you liked my poem. Quite honestly, I didn't think I'd get many replies on this one. LOL.


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    Re: Torn between two worlds...

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Thanks for the advice. ^_^ And I'm glad you liked my poem. Quite honestly, I didn't think I'd get many replies on this one. LOL.
    lol well yuo hit a soft spot with everyone who wouldnt reply?
    this poem just screams out to be posted on lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Torn between two worlds...

    I wish i could write like that, but i cant.lol congrades man!

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