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Jul 06, 2007, 06:55 AM
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 | traffic Life is like being stuck in traffic when you look from a far distance , you see a bridge. and ask your self am i ever going to get to that bridge. After thing that you slowly pass over the bridge without noticing it. Then one of your favorite songs come on and you are singing along with it. the next thing you know your going faster and faster you are out of traffic and that you are free to move on the open roads.. Last edited by chrystalann2004; Aug 02, 2007 at 09:03 AM. |
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Jul 08, 2007, 10:19 AM
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| Re: traffic i'm sorry im not trying to sound rude but this to me sounds more like a long metaphore, you know that kind that your parents tell you to make you understand things when your feeling bad. i mean i like the metaphore it makes sense and it is put in a nice way but it doesn't scream poem to me.
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Jul 08, 2007, 12:12 PM
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| Re: traffic Hmm... interesting... very interesting... makes one think... yea... I guess you're right- life is like that You've done a rally nice work here, I really enjoyed reading it and will be looking for your name in the poem section for now on... |
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Jul 09, 2007, 06:18 AM
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i guess it can be use as both metaphore and poem your not being and rude i realy preciate your in sight on it thank u Quote:
than you i am glad you like it i will [/COLOR] try and post more . Last edited by Kasai; Aug 03, 2007 at 04:56 AM. Reason: Double posting | ||
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Jul 11, 2007, 08:08 AM
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| Re: traffic amazing!!!!trutly amazing! i like it alot. it does relate to life alot of way!! good job!! 
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Aug 02, 2007, 09:02 AM
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choose .it at all once . basicly when you choose what suit then you take off and no can stop you. | |
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