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    traffic

    Life is like being stuck in traffic
    when you look from a far distance , you see a bridge.
    and ask your self am i ever going to get to that bridge.
    After thing that you slowly pass over the bridge
    without noticing it.
    Then one of your favorite songs come on
    and you are singing along with it.
    the next thing you know your going
    faster and faster you are out of traffic and
    that you are free to move on the open
    roads..
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    Re: traffic

    i'm sorry im not trying to sound rude but this to me sounds more like a long metaphore, you know that kind that your parents tell you to make you understand things when your feeling bad. i mean i like the metaphore it makes sense and it is put in a nice way but it doesn't scream poem to me.
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    Hmm... interesting... very interesting... makes one think... yea... I guess you're right- life is like that

    You've done a rally nice work here, I really enjoyed reading it and will be looking for your name in the poem section for now on...

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    Quote Originally Posted by sangogirl View Post
    i'm sorry im not trying to sound rude but this to me sounds more like a long metaphore, you know that kind that your parents tell you to make you understand things when your feeling bad. i mean i like the metaphore it makes sense and it is put in a nice way but it doesn't scream poem to me.

    i guess it can be use as both metaphore and poem
    your not being and rude i realy preciate your in sight on it
    thank u

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Hmm... interesting... very interesting... makes one think... yea... I guess you're right- life is like that

    You've done a rally nice work here, I really enjoyed reading it and will be looking for your name in the poem section for now on...
    than you i am glad you like it i will
    try and post more .
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    amazing!!!!trutly amazing! i like it alot. it does relate to life alot of way!! good job!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki View Post
    amazing!!!!trutly amazing! i like it alot. it does relate to life alot of way!! good job!!
    thank you so much i glad you like it girl. yes life you may alot
    choose .it at all once . basicly when you choose what suit
    then you take off and no can stop you.

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