Tragedy...

Tragedy of 22 october 2007 of my life...

Opening my eyes,...
It's a gloomy day today.
I realised it as i look outside my window.
It became a bad omen.

That afternoon was startled with a news.
A news i thought i will never hear.
My cautious and careful father is hospitalized,
in critical condition...

It brought me to my feet.
Startled, amazingly suprised...
the careful and cautious person,
such as my dad be involved in an accident.

Worried,...my mom holds her tears,
Gazing upon my dad's weak body made me speechless.
My house turns gloomier than the day.
The saddest day i could think of is today...

I wonder if he will be fine...
I prayed so he will be fine...
I hoped he will be fine...
I want him to be fine...

So does my whole family...which is now in grief...


(i will edit it after i know what happens next...so now.. no ending yet...)

:omg: Your father! Is he really okay, or is it just a poem? I want him to be fine, too!

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Originally Posted by RayMe

Tragedy of 22 october 2007 of my life...

Opening my eyes,...
It's a gloomy day today.
I realised it as i look outside my window.
It became a bad omen.

That afternoon was startled with a news.
A news i thought i will never hear.
My cautious and careful father is hospitalized,
in critical condition...

It brought me to my feet.
Startled, amazingly suprised...
the careful and cautious person,
such as my dad be involved in an accident.

Worried,...my mom holds her tears,
Gazing upon my dad's weak body made me speechless.
My house turns gloomier than the day.
The saddest day i could think of is today...

I wonder if he will be fine...
I prayed so he will be fine...
I hoped he will be fine...
I want him to be fine...

So does my whole family...which is now in grief...


(i will edit it after i know what happens next...so now.. no ending yet...)

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oh...*hugs you*poor brother...now i understand why are you upset and confused
i hope he'll be fine
and good poem Ray:2thumbs:

awww! rayme sorry I can understand what your going through. "hugs and hugs some more" Good poem rayme. I hope your dad is alright.

Nope.. this is the truth...man.. *sighs*

Thank you alex ^^ and big sis...*hugs back* i hope so too... ^^ *sighs*

ray *hugs* ur dad will most defently be in my prayers ^^

and i really hope he will be ok

its nice to see you dont keep things bottled up

."/..oh my ray "/ im so sorry i hope he'll be ok "/

aww ..That's bad ..Poor boy ..How sad that ?
I hope your dad get ok very soon ..*OMG*..
*hugs dudu*...