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![]() ![]() | traveling man traveling man i travel from here to there never knowing where ill end up alone i travel, as i have always have a freind here and there but never more for i travel to much but the thing is i dont travel on foot, the travel i speak of is the movement of the heart. the travel is hazardious, and i spend it alone. my heart travels alone, as it has always done. i travel alone in life, i know not how to love. ive never been loved, and i travel so much. i carry so much luggage, so much emotion. i fear as i travel i shall never be happy. im a traveling man, with a traveling heart, i want to make time to be happy. but the world i live in is so busy. so i keep on traveling alone, cause im a traveling man. well that came from what im feeling.... and its true at least about the part of being alone.... and it does seem like my heart travels like my poem....... ~god of death~
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![]() ![]() | Re: traveling man Quote:
Can't wait to read more!!!
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![]() | Re: traveling man Lovely poem GOD. I really liked it. Spelling corrections could be made, but other than that, awesome poem. I feel that way sometimes. Nice poem, God Of Death. |
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![]() ![]() | Re: traveling man thanks freinds, for the comments and critz. and of course ill have more for ya...sooner or later. im glad you enjoyed it.makes me happy
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