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    traveling man

    traveling man

    i travel from here to there never knowing where ill end up
    alone i travel, as i have always have
    a freind here and there but never more
    for i travel to much

    but the thing is i dont travel on foot, the travel i speak of is
    the movement of the heart.
    the travel is hazardious, and i spend it alone.
    my heart travels alone, as it has always done.

    i travel alone in life, i know not how to love.
    ive never been loved, and i travel so much.
    i carry so much luggage, so much emotion.
    i fear as i travel i shall never be happy.

    im a traveling man, with a traveling heart,
    i want to make time to be happy.
    but the world i live in is so busy.
    so i keep on traveling alone, cause im a traveling man.

    well that came from what im feeling.... and its true at least about the part of being alone.... and it does seem like my heart travels like my poem.......
    ~god of death~
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: traveling man

    i travel alone in life, i know not how to love.
    ive never been loved, and i travel so much.
    I quoted my favorite lines. ^_^ I can really relate in some ways I guess. Then again, I'm only 17. I love the way it flows too, because i can understand it. I have never had a serious relationship like most of my friends, because I just don't feel anything for a person (at least not for long). I just hope I can with the person I care about now. ^_^

    Can't wait to read more!!!

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Lovely poem GOD. I really liked it. Spelling corrections could be made, but other than that, awesome poem. I feel that way sometimes. Nice poem, God Of Death.

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    thanks freinds, for the comments and critz. and of course ill have more for ya...sooner or later. im glad you enjoyed it.makes me happy
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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