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    A Traveller's journal

    I have travelled all my life
    searching for that one.
    Who'll understand and know me
    without saying a word.


    In this place
    where contradictions meet.
    I have found someone
    I can call a friend.


    I have always been travelling
    to search for someone to love.
    Yet all my roads lead nowhere
    my heart still belongs to none.

    In my small journey
    I am hoping to find
    One who just listens,
    and one who's heart i will want.


    I have been travelling
    friends i have trusted
    Yet though my travels lead me to many roads
    Among them i feel alone.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: A Traveller's journal

    I really like your poem ^^
    I'm not sure if you meant to do this or if I'm just looking way to into it ( ^^; )
    but I really like the transition of moods through out.
    You lead the reader through the set of emotions so that you lead them to set emotion or over all feeling at the end.
    good job ^^.

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