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    ~The Tree~

    I often think about that day
    When it was boring and grey
    There was something i did
    That now just leaves me in pain.

    I thought of him in that moment
    The memory of us together
    Promises that were made to each other
    His are now given to another

    She is so much better for him
    Has always been there
    But yet they fail to remember
    How much i still care

    Looking back on it now
    I guess i should have known
    That all the lies he would tell me
    Would never be shown

    So I go back to that tree
    The one i sat under
    Off to the side
    That everyone sees

    I look at my work
    Wonder where i went wrong
    Then slowly i lift my hand
    To that spot

    It's in the middle of the tree
    For everyone to see
    The love and care that went into
    Each and every letter

    There you will always be
    Forever side by side with me
    Cuz that's where i carved
    You and me

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    Re: ~The Tree~

    nice poem^^jamie
    it almost made made me cry,but it is beautiful

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    Re: ~The Tree~

    That was beautiful. I liked it allot. It was so sad and sweet at the same time.

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    Re: ~The Tree~

    ...wow... it's such a good poem ^^ *puts a hand to my mouth* *clears throat* my...voice aint... coming out..hehe..*clears it again* good job... ^^ keep up the good work ..

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    Thank you every one... It means a lot that you think it's a beautiful poem. I will write some more too.

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    Re: ~The Tree~

    it is a verry good poem Jamie I like it alot. good job I look forward to reading more from you.
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