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    a tribute

    Loosing a loved one is never an easy thing to go through. But this isn’t about the loss. It’s a tribute to those who hold the light of hope and the power of strength that everyone needs to get through the tuff times.

    To all those that hold that post in life, I commend you
    You know who you are, those around you know as well
    You are the ones who most people think are aloof and uncaring
    But to those who know and count on you, you are their everything

    Most people don’t want that responsibility
    Those who have experienced it only wish to do so only once
    But there are those few that have the fate to do so whether they want to or not

    The ones that seem almost unbreakable
    Unafraid in the face of sadness and fear
    The ones that always comfort and protect
    Those around them, whether they be family or friend

    Everybody knows somebody like this
    Has relied on them one time or another
    They are the same people who when everyone else is happy and alright
    Fall apart when left alone, unseen and forgotten by those around them

    To those who feel the gut wrenching pain but don’t have the luxury to show their own true feelings
    Remember them when the storm has passed
    Remember that they are human as well
    They lose a piece of their hearts every time they go through another ordeal
    Remember and thank them
    Kind words of remembrance will repair most damage that is done
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    Re: a tribute

    wow @.@...thats all i can say...your poem really touched my heart..and i thank you for that...beautiful work
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    Fire that is a very good poem. It is true what you wrote when someone doesn't know. Keep up with the good work and I can't wait to read more from you.

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    Re: a tribute

    agreed with big sis there a very good poem indeed ^^ but... theres a few spelling mistakes in there

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    Re: a tribute

    Thanks everyone for your praise. Also I fixed the spelling mistakes (thanks RayMe)

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    Re: a tribute

    theres 2 more spelling mistakes... Through (u wrote thru) and Command (commend)

    and your very welcomed

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    Wow...

    You've touched my heart Every detail describes something and every word means lots

    I personally liked this verse, very nicely explained.
    The ones that seem almost unbreakable
    Unafraid in the face of sadness and fear
    The ones that always comfort and protect
    Those around them, rather they are family or friend
    I also think these words are absolutely true, Very true and meaningful words.
    You are the ones who most people think are aloaf and uncaring
    But to those who know and count on you, you are their everything
    To put it all together, It was extremely and nicely done!

    Hope to read more from you.

    -Zainab

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