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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    whoa, someones def been workin hard. Keep it up. BLEACH rocks.
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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    wow you really put a lot of effort into these poems! i loved each and every one of them, and being a bleach fan myself, i can see how you got the pieces together. nice work! ^_^

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    those were very nice pieces Blade, i like them very much. it shall remain in my heart forever, i will cherish all of these moments i had in AO. thank you so much for the encouragement and support. i won't be seeing you anymore from this day onwards. take care and have a nice life.

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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    Nice life without you? Not even in dreams.

    Nice poem Blade.

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    "Inoue"

    I was happy with my big brother,
    We were living together and
    He took care me like mum.
    I remember during winter,
    My hands got numb making a snow rabbit
    And he came to take me inside.
    But I wanted to make a little one
    To represent us, his smile always warms me.

    The day he bought a pair of flower hairpins,
    He left me forever, died in a car accident.
    I cried so much that night, I couldn't sleep.
    I wore the hairpins even though I said,
    They were childish. I prayed to him everyday.
    Till I met Tatsuki, she was so strong.
    She helped me to get through the day.

    Eventually she helped me get past the mourning
    But I always wear my hairpins as my tribute
    To my big brother who protected me for so long.
    I had so many friends around me,
    Even Icihgo if he had a scary face.
    He protected me when a monster came,
    My brother who said I could came with him.
    I wanted to but I was confused and Icihgo
    Fought to protect me. But I stood up
    And hug my brother saying, "I'm sorry"

    Everyone always protected me but
    When Tatsuki was hurt, I wanted to
    Protect her and they came to help me.
    Three to protect, Two to heal, One to fight.
    I protect Tatsuki and smiled when she awoke.
    Yorchihi helped me to get stronger.
    I wanted to get stronger for Icihgo and Rukia.

    She was one of my best friend
    Even if it was a short time.
    I went to the Society to help bring her back.

    NNNOOOOO bleach for the next 2 weeks!!!! aaaahhhh Tht's unacceptable. Wut am i gonna do!! Aaaahh well, tht's life. BTW I think u ppl can see wut this one is abt.
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    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    to be honest, inoue's character pisses me off greatly. don't ask why... i'll go on for days. but none the less, this poem's awesome. i can relate to inoue's character through the poem, which is really great. i don't know what exactly happened with a fellow member of ao, but hopefully she'll be back soon.

    aww no bleach for 2 weeks..! i know how you feel lol.

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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    Great works! Simply well-written. Most of the imagery that you wanted the readers to get out your poems is detailed enough to have a pretty good mental picture. I am a hardcore Bleach fan, too, so I find this extremely intriguing. Oh yeah, your poem neatly summarized the story and the plot as well, so great job. I hope to see more of your works.
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    NNNOOOOO bleach for the next 2 weeks!!!! aaaahhhh Tht's unacceptable. Wut am i gonna do!! Aaaahh well, tht's life. BTW I think u ppl can see wut this one is abt.
    Good for me. ^_^ I am still in episode # 65, so it gives me time to catch up to you all. Until then, you will have to wait, my lovelies.

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    Re: A Tribute to Bleach

    "Hollow"

    I see everyone walk past me,
    Like a ghost, nothing to affect anyone.
    I thought I would go to heaven
    But I held a great grude in my heart.
    Then they came, the white masked.
    I was brought to a desolate place
    And I heard a voice, "Turn him"

    I ran, I was so scare for what
    They were going to do to me.
    They came at me and I felt
    My heart is being eaten away.
    Soon, all I could feel my hatred.
    I felt stronger, faster, I was
    Looking at the world through a mask.
    I had claws, wings and quick feet.
    I could smell something wonderful,
    A soul smelled so wonderful.

    Soon, I let out a roar, an unearthly howl.
    I went into the shadows and saw the world.
    I was like a dog finding that scent.
    There it was, young woman,
    her scent was wonderful rich.
    I soon, charged towards her
    With my hunger urging me on.
    She was in my grasp,
    the scent was wonderful.
    I would soon be satifisted.

    Suddenly, I felt a sharp pain in my arm
    And I let go, turned to see who it was.
    A orange hair kid carrying huge sword.
    I could smell his soul, it was
    Even more mouthing watering than the woman's.
    I withdrew and attack again from the back,
    And then I felt something,
    Like a weight was lifted from my heart.

    He cut through my mask, it hurt
    But it soon felt like a relief.
    I felt free from everything,
    That held me down,
    I was going to a peaceful place.

    This is the hollow's point of view but I dunno really know wut being a hollow feels like.
    Last edited by Blade X; Apr 13, 2006 at 12:54 AM.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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