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    Re: A tribute to Kenshin Himura

    Not bad. I like the way it tells the story of how Kenshin got his name. If I am correct, this poem holds the scene, somewhere in the middle of disc entitled as: Trust. ^_^;; So, I presume you are trying to cover the OVA series bit by bit. ^^;;;; Anyway! Yet again, neat depiction of the storyline, Blade. I like the way how you try to bring along the story in such a way that people, who haven't seen/read Samurai X would understand what is going on. (^_^) But, where do you get all this inspiration, I wonder?
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    Re: A tribute to Kenshin Himura

    Not bad. I like the way it tells the story of how Kenshin got his name. If I am correct, this poem holds the scene, somewhere in the middle of disc entitled as: Trust. ^_^;; So, I presume you are trying to cover the OVA series bit by bit. ^^;;;; Anyway! Yet again, neat depiction of the storyline, Blade. I like the way how you try to bring along the story in such a way that people, who haven't seen/read Samurai X would understand what is going on. (^_^) But, where do you get all this inspiration, I wonder?
    ちょっと単一あるか。 私はあり、女の子がほしいと思う im back and seeking vengence!

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    Re: A tribute to Kenshin Himura

    "The Man with Evil on his Back"

    Ssanosuke Sagara, a former member of Sekihoutai.
    He bore a grudge against the government for their betrayal,
    And he had a good heart though he never paid for his meals.
    He was hired to killed me after we first encountered him,
    Again, my past had caught up with me again.
    He wanted to defeat me to prove he was strong,
    He carried Zanbato, the largest sword ever made.

    Under the light of the moon,
    We were about to clash then the little ones came out.
    Then I saw it in his eyes,
    He had kindness underneath that exterior of hatred.
    He had a limit to fighting,
    "Women and children shouldn't see violence"
    He walked off only stopping in the moonlight,
    He had vowed to defeat me tomorrow.
    I couldn't say no,
    His spirit was free, strong and that of a fighters.
    I could not deny him to fight for I was once like that.

    In the heat of the next day,
    We stood ready to fight like rivals of old.
    His appearance was deveicing to me,
    He had so skinny yet he had the strenght of ten men.
    Swinging his Zanbuto and easily dodging his sword strikes,
    His movements were limited with such a large weapon.
    In a flash, running down his weapon towards him,
    I unleashed my Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryū technques on him,
    For the first time in years, I had used my skills to bring him down.
    And yet he got up, no man had ever managed to stand.
    I was forced to use more moves on him.
    Still he managed to stand up
    But I could see he was starting to waver.
    Battered bruised, I was complimented him for being able to still stand.
    He was no ordinary man and
    Yet he realize his anger was not needed.
    With a final strike, I brought him down into my arms.

    He healed rather quickly but he still had bandages on,
    He seem okay and we become friends.
    Sanosuke Sagara, the man with the evil on his back.

    This is of coz when sanosuke sagara met kenshin himura. Now for some of the words u might not understand.

    Zanbato was a fictional sword or rather exaggerated in the anime series. It was a the largest sword ever made, with only a handle and the sword itself. It has no swordguard.

    Sekihoutai was a group in the imperial alliance which was betrayed by the Tokugawa government when the group was accused of spreading lies. Sanosuke was apparently saved by the captain of this group but he had hated the government ever since.

    Plz enjoy this latest poem n comment. Any comment good or bad is welcomed.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: A tribute to Kenshin Himura

    wow i really liked this story untill now
    i have never heard of the story your
    telling here but i love it i had to read atleast
    two stroys beofre i posted this really good.
    i liked how he would not fight with children present
    wich i think is awesome initself and when they fought
    the next day they fought with passion or atleast i think
    it was passion . then they becmae freind's i really liked this
    story alot 5 out 5 stars from me
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A tribute to Kenshin Himura

    Ok, the style of the tribute is a bit different. It's very structured in a chronological sense. The reading was a good summary of Kenshin's background. From a poetic stand point, it didn't bump me much, but I'm sure that wasn't your intent.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    My past had caught up with me,
    The man who had cold eyes,
    Lust for blood was driving him, Jin-e,
    I was asked to help protect, the first of many.

    I knew this man was dangerous to be left alive,
    I had to break his will to kill somehow,
    Somehow, it would take a killer to defeat a killer.

    The same as he ever was,
    The same skill he used to kill his opponents,
    But I was not the skilled warrior,
    Not enough to defeat him.

    I had to shut myself off from everyone,
    To protect them, to carry out my vow,
    Yet Kaoru wanted me to stay,
    She was sweet and naive which I found endearing.

    Like the winged demon,
    Jin-e took her away from me,
    Wanting, desiring the beast of blood to return
    He would regret his choice to involve Kaoru.

    Under the moonlight,
    It looked close to the same one I killed under,
    There was, Jin-e the fool wanted his death.
    Tonight no one would mourn for him.

    Once more into the brink,
    Fighting to save Kaoru's life,
    To kill Jin-e, to save hers.
    Equivalent trade...

    Yet it was kaoru who saved me,
    She pulled me back from the threshold,
    The fight was over, Jin-e wanted his death.
    He parted under the moon with his final words,
    "A murderer will always be a murderer"

    revival!!! finally got round to getting this back up...mods if this is against ur rules then feel free to lock it, i'll go and make another one

    anyways this is one of kenshin's more significant fights with the "past"

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Both of the poems were interesting(of course). You've done a great job^^ Emn... I think I like the first one. Yeah, it's a nice one. Lives up my senses in the dark *smile*
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    revival!!! finally got round to getting this back up...mods if this is against ur rules then feel free to lock it, i'll go and make another one

    anyways this is one of kenshin's more significant fights with the "past"
    Yes Blade, dead threads cannot be revived, so please make another thread with the continuation of your tribute to Rurouni Kenshin, and just include a link to this thread, which will direct others to read your first poems. ^_^

    +Closing+

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