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    Tribute to my Dad

    I crushed my own dreams
    And suppressed my screams

    I am taking it in
    Have you ever asked me, how my day has been?

    You never called me your son,
    I guess I am not what they called a “loved one”

    I really do try my best,
    You treat me like an outdoor pest

    Had nothing to gain,
    All I got was pain.

    I always respect you, and keep every thing in
    I don’t even know where should I begin

    Let me lead my own life, let me do what I wana do
    I am falling on each step, it’s like a another blue

    What was my fault?
    It feels like an assault

    Do I really deserve it?
    It’s eating me inside bit by bit.

    I tried to be a good son
    I guess it can’t be outdone.

    **** this shit
    I am done with this

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    The first stanza was awesome. From there? Wasnt really interest. And remember, profanity in poetry? Sometimes is good. However, AO does have one or two rules regarding the use of it.
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