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    Tribute to ''There she is!"

    A flash animation series has just come to its end. I wanted to thank the person who made me laugh and cry quite a bit. Placed before certain parts are the flash animations that are represented by those parts. Be sure to check them out to see if I managed to bring out the important aspects of that animation. Happy journeying through more than 4 years of animation in the making. In green beforehand is something I wrote to the author on his BBS.




    Here is a little something to say thank you one last time. It may not be as perfectly refined as your flash animations, and it doesn't rhyme as well as I would want it to, but here is a little something that I wrote after watching ''There She Is!! final step - Imagine''. I hope you like it.


    There she is!

    Here we stand after all this fun,
    Now that all is said and done,
    Could we ever try to see,
    A work that has such sincere beauty.

    And yet we know that all will be,
    Deep within our hearts to free.
    Contained inside memories,
    Forever anchored by carrots and fishies. (the word fishies doesn’t exist, but for translation, it’s the word fish transformed so that it would rhyme. It could be a form of slang)

    I call upon you one last time,
    Journeyman of mine. (Amalloc being the journeyman, along with all those who helped him make ‘’There she is!’’)
    To rock our lives,
    And make us feel that life isn’t just made up of halves. (Often we see life in a good or a bad way, always forgetting that both always exist. When we are sad, happiness can exist. When we are happy, sadness still can come up.)

    There She Is!!

    Confusion seemed to be the first act,
    That of step 1 as a matter of fact.
    There were no others like it,
    That blew the minds of those lost in violence and hate.

    There She Is!! step2 - Cake dance

    Then came the aftermath of a sensation,
    Vivid colors and fast paced action.
    A race for friendship hand in hand,
    Possibilities going beyond what had been possibly planned.

    ¶¸´Ù ±×³*!! step3 - µµÅ°¿Í ³ªºñ

    Life went on and time went by,
    Dust settled down yet our hopes were high.
    You didn't give in after many hardships,
    Love bloomed through your finger tips.
    Without regrets all was gambled,
    But consequences would soon follow.

    ¶¸´Ù ±×³*!! step4 - ÆĶó´ÙÀ̽º

    And then violence and hate showed its ugly face,
    Pouring out of a society in disgrace.
    Despair and frustration blinding their minds,
    All seemed to be lost in confusion of all kinds,
    But a twist of events brought something precious...

    ¶¸´Ù ±×³*!! final step - Imagine

    Finally,
    Courageously,
    Masterfully,
    Emotionally,
    Truthfully,
    You brought an end to it all.
    Tears flowing freely with eyes set upon your final plea.
    You have showed that all is not just darkness.
    Nor did you show light at its brightest.
    Simply the ups and downs of what life has to offer.
    In the dreams that humanity shares,
    Only one symbol can face all that is.
    Faith in oneself.
    Desire for better times.
    Doing one's best.
    Trusting those close to you.
    Never giving up.

    ..and that event that you brought to all the WORLD,
    Through the internet that is so vast.
    This thing that none can go against that you brought us,
    is...

    HOPE


    THE END






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    Re: Tribute to ''There she is!"

    Omgosh, Soldat this is such a beautiful poem. and that is an awesome show. It made me smile and laugh and cry. You are so good at writing poems keep on ^^.

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    Re: Tribute to ''There she is!"

    Thank you very much Kiani Haki22 for your comment. Very soon the final step will go on newgrounds and get a much larger crowd. It's due out December 18th over there. So be sure to check it out and comment on it :P

    I'd be curious to know though if there are parts that could be improved upon. I would like to perfect it to represent even more the flash animations and emotions that go through them
    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
    Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME

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