Blade X

I have experience the pain of loss,
My entire was wiped out in a single night,
By the one person I had looked up to,
My older brother, Itcahi
He single-handed wiped out everyone who knew him,
He had achieved everything and was called a genius.
I had lived in his shadow for so long,
My father had called him "My true son"

I had always tried hard to please my father's expectations,
And all that is left are the memories from that bloody night.
They said I was lucky to survive but I know the truth,
He wanted me to get stronger, I was weak.
Using his sharingan, he made me relive that moment,
I couldn't do anything but cry out, begging him to stop it.

It had been several years since I saw him,
I had grown cold and quiet but confident of my skills,
And yet this annoying person, Uzumaki Naruto.
HE had potential which possibly surpass mine,
Yet he was so idiotic in his ways.
The odd against him, he would never give up,
Believing that he would become a Hokage.
A futile dream and foolish boy,
Yet he surprise me time and time again.
Able to beat the rogue water ninjas,
Stopped a gigantic snake to save me,
His eyes had changed everytime I saw him fight,
They were red and were like a fox's eyes.

I shivered at the sight of it,
But I realise that I couldn't beat my brother,
If I couldnt beat the demons in my way.
Orochimaru, demon in his own way,
Gave me the way to gain more power,
Because I am an avenger.
Through the darkness, no matter
I will gain more strength to defeat you,
Itcahi, my brother, the destroyer of the Uchiha clan.

enjoy my tribute of Sasuke n plz comment good or bad

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Yuri_kusanagi

o.O oh--oh--- this poem is so nicely done... you really know a lot , blade-san ^^ from his childhood till now ...
yeah.. you really write out sasuke`s feeling... *especially naruto`s part * XXDD

^^nice one ^0^

Aya-kun

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B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g.

really good poem....really tells the emotion sasuke feels.....

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royal cutie pain

wow. O.o very nice. keep it up! XD

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The Fighter

Nice how you took sasukes thoughts and feeling and quotes and threw it into a nicely done poem! I liked this poem alot beacause I like naruto and the mix of your poem and sasukes feeling is awesome!!

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