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    A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    Just another tribute to Wolfwood. To me personally, this represents Wolfwood talking to himself from his past and reflecting on unfullfilled dreams.
    By the way, I'm talking about Wolfwood from Trigun. Please, I love constructive criticism.


    God of Wine

    Every thought that I repent
    Theres another chip you havent spent
    And youre cashing them all in
    Where do we begin to get clean again?
    Can we get clean again?

    I walk home alone with you
    And the mood youre born into
    Sometimes you let me in
    And I take it on the chin
    I cant get clean again
    I want to know can we get clean again?

    The God of wine comes crashing through
    The head lights of a car that took you farther
    Than you thought youd ever want to go

    We cant get back again
    We cant get back again

    She takes a drink and then she waits
    The alcohol it permeates
    And soon the cells give way, and cancels out the day

    I cant keep it all together
    I know I know I know... I cant keep it all together
    And the sirens song that is your madness
    Holds a truth I cant erase
    All alone on your face

    Every glamorous sunrise
    Throws the planets out of line
    A star sign out of whack, a fraudulent zodiac
    And the God of wine is crouched down in my room
    You let me down, I said it, now Im going down
    And youre not even around
    And I said no no no...

    I cant keep it all together
    I know I know I know...
    I cant keep it all together

    And theres a memory of a window
    Looking through I see you
    Searching for something I could never give you
    And theres someone who understands
    You more than I do
    A sadness I cant erase
    All alone on your face

    Thank you Sazuka for this awesome signature!

    You're a louse, Roger Smith.

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    That was a good poem,

    The imagry you used in the poem realy tied it together!

    Keep that work up!

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    Wow! Like Fighter said, the visualizations you portray in your poem really pull it all together. Wolfwood's one of my favorite characters, and if there's anyone worth giving a tribute to, it's Wolfwood! Keep up the good work, Jet!

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    Dang.
    Wow.
    I wish I thought about this one.
    Good work.

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    hmmmmm

    that was impressive but I think I can make a better one .

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    Go for it! I love it when Wolfwood gets his props! I don't care whose is better, as long as it's dedicated to the coolest character ever.

    Thank you Sazuka for this awesome signature!

    You're a louse, Roger Smith.

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    wow man that was awesome, i juts got a question for you, who is the god of wine?

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    Re: A Tribute to Wolfwood.

    The god of wine can be whoever you want him to be. That's the nature of poetry. When I was writing it though, my thought 's of the God of Wine were that he was


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    a symbol of Wolfwood's death. While he lay dying on the church floor, he was thinking of how he could never reconcile himself from the path he had chosen during his lifetime. He couldn't get "clean", and he can't get "back". If he could have lived longer, perhaps he could have repented, but the God of Wine forbade him through his death. Remember Wolfwood's last words: "Please, God, I don't want to die! There's so much left I still have to do!".

    Thank you Sazuka for this awesome signature!

    You're a louse, Roger Smith.

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