Trouble Don't last always
All my life people have been telling me
that trouble don't last always!
So when they tell me why i'm
Sitting here pleading , begging
for a brighter day
All they can say is
Trouble don't last all- ways!
I sit here and its cold and
dark and i get so lonely
All they have to say
trouble don't last all- ways!
22 years went by and i'm
still walking around boxed in a
cage like an animal
and as i look up in the sky
not even God can tell me why!
trouble don't last all-ways
Soon eight years go by
faster than a sparkling dazzling,
estatic firefly in a
darting, erupting ,
fire night sky
and even now i wonder why....
So muchh anger built inside me
i feed it every day!
......
And when the doors burst out open
and no shackles bringing me down
i turned to the guard; a tall 6' foot soldier
give me my belongings
And what i saw next
just picked my soul up and
threw me!
A smile crept on my face
adn the mighty bold soldier
tapped me on the shoulder
looked me in my eyes full of
tears
..
He understood my pain
and with a smile he
stood there and said
"trouble don't last all ways."
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o.0 im tired lol i hope you enjoy it :)
Re: Trouble Don't last always
hmmm.it seems that you are mentioning someone in this poem blackrose...Oh well then I have a good feeling in this poem^^...
Nice poem..!^^
Re: Trouble Don't last always
its a good poam and i think i have a reasonable answer to your question just remember this "nomater howe bad it is some one will olways have it worese" sorry for aney miss spelling
Re: Trouble Don't last always
The subject matter is important and you express it in a rather unique way, but it seems a bit long and I think it is almost two poems mashed together, it may have been better to divide it up.