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    Trouble Don't last always

    All my life people have been telling me
    that trouble don't last always!
    So when they tell me why i'm
    Sitting here pleading , begging
    for a brighter day
    All they can say is
    Trouble don't last all- ways!

    I sit here and its cold and
    dark and i get so lonely
    All they have to say
    trouble don't last all- ways!

    22 years went by and i'm
    still walking around boxed in a
    cage like an animal
    and as i look up in the sky
    not even God can tell me why!
    trouble don't last all-ways

    Soon eight years go by
    faster than a sparkling dazzling,
    estatic firefly in a
    darting, erupting ,
    fire night sky
    and even now i wonder why....

    So muchh anger built inside me
    i feed it every day!
    ......

    And when the doors burst out open
    and no shackles bringing me down
    i turned to the guard; a tall 6' foot soldier
    give me my belongings
    And what i saw next
    just picked my soul up and
    threw me!

    A smile crept on my face
    adn the mighty bold soldier
    tapped me on the shoulder
    looked me in my eyes full of
    tears
    ..

    He understood my pain
    and with a smile he
    stood there and said

    "trouble don't last all ways."
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    Re: Trouble Don't last always

    hmmm.it seems that you are mentioning someone in this poem blackrose...Oh well then I have a good feeling in this poem^^...
    Nice poem..!^^
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
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    Re: Trouble Don't last always

    its a good poam and i think i have a reasonable answer to your question just remember this "nomater howe bad it is some one will olways have it worese" sorry for aney miss spelling

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    Re: Trouble Don't last always

    The subject matter is important and you express it in a rather unique way, but it seems a bit long and I think it is almost two poems mashed together, it may have been better to divide it up.

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