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Reply With QuoteWell balanced, you were able to keep up some theme all the way to end.
Saying same thing over and over again could be bad thing, but in this particular use
I consider that as really good option. Nice job X
I want to be free of this body,
Free of this pain,
Free of this misery,
Free of this hell that I go through.
I want to be free of emotions,
Free of this hatred I feel,
Free of this disappointment,
Free of this sadness that is deep witin my heart.
I want to be one with the sky,
Free to be able to fly with the eagles,
Free to be able to rest on the clouds,
Free to be able to watch the world go by while I'm blissed.
well enjoy ppl and comment plz. i take all critism onboard
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Well balanced, you were able to keep up some theme all the way to end.
Saying same thing over and over again could be bad thing, but in this particular use
I consider that as really good option. Nice job X
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
now this a true freedom, great work my friend
great job, blade! keep it up....
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
Very good poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it, and just so I don't have to repeat -
great job, blade! keep it up....
Death is your most loyal companion, for he will never fail you.
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