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    True Love!

    Time is slow as the evening goes
    everything has now faded , the sounds
    of pleasure are made with such passion
    and desire , how there finger's touch
    play there melody is such sweet ecstasy.

    Her hips are moved and rocked ,
    as the sweat beads and the breath
    is quickened she aches for his touch ,
    hours pass like a a slow moving wind
    that blows lightly over the ground.

    He tastes her sweetness as they
    embrace that which seems to be
    just for them , they feel there time
    is about to reach its final climax as
    a she digs her nails deep into his back.

    Body's tense then the moment happens
    Love's true embrace has them craving
    that which they have worked for , time
    slowly goes by as they cuddle and snuggle
    loving the company of one another.

    This is what love can lead for those who
    truly want something that can never really
    be given with just any touch.
    .................................................. ........

    this poem is more than just about the touches
    the pleasure or even that certain way you love
    someone . no this poem is to show that when 2
    people truly love one another that what most would
    look at as a quickie or somthing just for pleasure
    goes beyond that.

    it become love something that most
    people never experience but go to belive
    they have , true love is much more than
    just have sex its about exploring your love
    whole body not just 1 or 2 things .

    anyway comments and suggestions are
    welcomed
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    Re: True Love!

    This poem is so sexy! It reminds me how love and love making should be like. Alot of people have "quickies" and I have too,but to be made love to would be a dream come true. Awesome job sweetie I hope to see more.
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