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    True Love

    A single moment when two lovers kiss
    hope is born for a new beginning all worries
    are cast aside as they embrace the twilight
    and face the doubters.

    Pedals on a rose gently caress her face
    as he leans in and kisses her , the moment
    forever captured in her heart , love can not
    put into words what the moment leads to.

    Tears fall down her cheek , he holds her close
    not letting the fear of being alone take her , a
    sweet embrace from him and a silent sigh from her
    makes the moment perfect.

    Things crumble and fall , people die with regret
    everything seems so wrong , nothing seems to make
    since how can things be so amazing in a world that
    always looks on the faults and lies that make the world
    turn so slow.

    For a moment there is love and there is hope maybe
    that will be enough but no one really knows , in the moment
    there can only be us and thats what makes everything seem
    better , love for them makes the moment seem tame and thats
    all that matter.
    ___________
    for someone i love
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: True Love

    awwwwwww this is so sweet ^^ for your lover i hope they like it very much ^^


    good luck
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    Re: True Love

    OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!SUPER SWEET AND ROMANTIC!
    HEY!HolderOftheDarkChalice can I use this poem for my girlfriend?
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: True Love

    @ rose yeah she liked it alot and im glad you liked it

    @ hell , yeah you can use this no problem hope it works for you
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: True Love

    My my my, someone's been living one twisted fairy tale, hasn't they?

    Well, bro, I wish ya a happy ending.

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    Re: True Love

    Wow. Who knew from your sig and avatar you could this could be so touching? lol, I kid, I kid.

    Really good job. Whoever you wrote it for should like it.

    Now if only I could write like this for my Girlfriend..

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    Re: True Love

    This is very well written.
    I like the emotion you put into it.
    I could never write a poem to save my life. >.<
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