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    a true love poem

    A true love poem

    You were one of my friend’s boyfriends.

    I loved you even when I knew you were with her.

    I wasn’t jealous of you together.

    I knew I was too late but when she told me it was over I was amazed.

    I didn’t believe ones words.

    But I now would have my chance but I was terrified of what you would say…

    So I waited awhile to think….

    Would I ever be what u want… or need?

    Now I know I asked with faith in myself.

    ‘Did you love me’ and your answer ‘Do you really love me?’

    And my answer yes I’m as sure as I ever have been.

    I assure you even if venue and the stars think were not meant to be.

    I believe we are and my heart will be the only thing that I will trust

    When it comes to my love.

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    Re: a true love poem

    I enjoyed this poem verry much (chezz... I've become a poem lover spending my time here, on animeonline), it's really a true love poem, and I like the fact that it's an unusual love. Especialy I love these words:
    "I assure you even if venue and the stars think were not meant to be.
    I believe we are and my heart will be the only thing that I will trust
    When it comes to my love."
    Reminds me of my own thoughts..... It's so painful when you feel that you couldn't ever be together with someone you love, that everything is against it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: a true love poem

    Well.. it was enjoyable, aside from the random grammatical and puncuation errors and the really small font. >.< ... keep it up ^.^
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    Re: a true love poem

    your talkin about R***_**** aren't you???^_^ I think that it is a very lovely poem... that is true in so many relationships... ^_^

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    Re: a true love poem

    such a sweet and romantic poem. That's how I feel about my boyfriend. I have found my one true love.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: a true love poem

    thinkies for the comments ^^

    &#172;__&#172; ermmmm maybe ^^ ......

    but yeah its real true feelings i really liked this one

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