( this is what made me a poet)
I have given you in life
sorrow and fate all the time
I still climbin the only tree
That has the same care as you belive
I have reach the skys
Now i have the perfect view to watch you
With my tearing eyes
I protect you from fallin to Darkness
But there are some holes that make you
And make you go straight to the dark hole
There are some reasons when you awake
From all the dreams and mistakes you made
Thinkin that you've been alone all along
There was always a living person
You have already takin a risk
God' is allways besides you walking with hes
That person is always thinkin
If you belive how true you are
( heres my award)
Last edited by Baal; Aug 08, 2006 at 10:29 PM.
What a reward, it struck me rather than your poem...well good one...nice poem...
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awesome poem baal congrats on the award and hope you go places with your talent and the peom was awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
You should become a poet, I like it.
Your life means nothing to me.