Legend (Feb 24, 2009)
I'm writing this poem out of bordem.
Yesterday someone spammed this forum.
I saw the title of the thread.
"True wholesale Prices" was what it said.
Upstairs, in my head... No one is home.
Because I thought it was a great title of a poem
Instead of course... an advertisment.
You could only imagine my surprise-ment.
So I reported the faulty thread, with haste.
But so the title won't go to waste.
I wrote this poem, hope it suffices.
And is worthy of the title "True Wholesale Prices"
... Not Ever Again...
Legend (Feb 24, 2009)
Nice poem Peachit's really really good
it has a really good flow and rythm, really amazing ^^ hope to read some more
I really enjoy when you write funny. very nice rhyme, it made it fun.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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