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Reply With Quotewow thats pretty power ful and good
Trust me the words felt
bad as they rolled from my lips,
i know what you said and it makes
perfect sence.
The trust you gave the honour
i shamed ,nothing i do can ever
right the wrong i have done to you
ashamed i must feel but thats the part i dont get.
knowing i did this i can only smile ,
please give me your hate ,and all
your dirty look's the rumours are true
i start them like wild fire's on a dry day.
Trust me these words will always
haunt me because today i betrayed them,
why must i be such a wreched person?,
if only i knew but i only know pain.
Your pain it comes from trusting me, how
could you with how i am knowing that i
might lie,the truth is that i did can you trust me
ever again? i really doubt it .
Life its so unfair why must i lie to get a truth
or get a truth with a lie this world is so confusing
why must i and why do i make you hurt ,it isn't
because i want to,but i smile i wonder why?
So as i walk away from you i will say i am sorry,
but will i mean it like the rumore's say i don't
but dosnt matter anyway because word's don't
mean a thing to me ,only you heart does and you're
freindship.
this poem is about those wwho you think
you know but they hide the real them from you.
or me even
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 14, 2006 at 11:17 AM.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
wow thats pretty power ful and good
I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.
Wow, that was really good. It does make you think, too. It's exactly true. Nice poem, though. It was well thought out.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
sweet words man, the words flow brillently
Hey Bro!
Awesome poem! My favorite stanza from this poem is
So as i walk away from you i will say i am sorry,
but will i mean it like the rumore's say i don't
but dosnt matter anyway because word's don't
mean a thing to me ,only you heart does and you're
freindship.
It get right down to the point you are making! Awesome job Bro!
Omg,Wow! This was sooooooo awesome big bro! I just love it! And what you wrote about is so true.Some people do really hide their selfs from others but I think it's cause their scared of not being loved for the real way they are.But all in all,awesome poem as always.
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
This is a very powerful piece of poetry. Deep and thoughtful from my perspective. I think it's exellently written with the perfect words.
"Along with death...hope and rebirth can begin." -Sailor Saturn
thank you eberyone i am glad you all liked this poem
and i also aprecait the comments as well its been a while since
i have done one that people could relate to or understand.
@ sis thanks for your comment and you are right
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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