+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 8 of 9

Thread: Trust

  1. #1
    Fish Fingers & Custard Ice Hockey Champion, Smaugs Treasure Champion, Mini Putt 3 Champion, Ant Tracks Champion, Jungle Hunt Champion, Madnetics Champion, Manole Champion, Blokken Champion, Fast Food Fiasco Champion, Shapes Hifters Champion, Mud and Blood: Vietnam Champion HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Location
    someplace where the only light is the moon above
    Posts
    3,118
    Thanks
    102
    Thanked 70 Times in 64 Posts

    Trust

    Trust me the words felt
    bad as they rolled from my lips,
    i know what you said and it makes
    perfect sence.

    The trust you gave the honour
    i shamed ,nothing i do can ever
    right the wrong i have done to you
    ashamed i must feel but thats the part i dont get.

    knowing i did this i can only smile ,
    please give me your hate ,and all
    your dirty look's the rumours are true
    i start them like wild fire's on a dry day.

    Trust me these words will always
    haunt me because today i betrayed them,
    why must i be such a wreched person?,
    if only i knew but i only know pain.

    Your pain it comes from trusting me, how
    could you with how i am knowing that i
    might lie,the truth is that i did can you trust me
    ever again? i really doubt it .

    Life its so unfair why must i lie to get a truth
    or get a truth with a lie this world is so confusing
    why must i and why do i make you hurt ,it isn't
    because i want to,but i smile i wonder why?

    So as i walk away from you i will say i am sorry,
    but will i mean it like the rumore's say i don't
    but dosnt matter anyway because word's don't
    mean a thing to me ,only you heart does and you're
    freindship.

    this poem is about those wwho you think
    you know but they hide the real them from you.
    or me even
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 14, 2006 at 11:17 AM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

  2. #2
    Otaku Speed Cards Champion, Foxhole 13 Champion, Commander Keen - Marooned on Mars Champion, Block Down Champion, Cubis 2 : Arcade Champion, Animal Connect Champion, Color Reactor 2 Champion, Crystal Clear Champion, Cubis 2 : Morph-Fun Champion, SputNik Champion, Blast The Enemy Champion, Prison Escape Champion, Shock Defence Champion ConradGuravitch103 may be famous one day ConradGuravitch103 may be famous one day ConradGuravitch103's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Location
    Home of the Stragglers Moon
    Posts
    337
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts

    Re: Trust

    wow thats pretty power ful and good
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

  3. #3
    Otaku Sincere may be famous one day Sincere may be famous one day Sincere's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Justin's heart
    Posts
    305
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Trust

    Wow, that was really good. It does make you think, too. It's exactly true. Nice poem, though. It was well thought out.
    C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg
    A white rose no longer alone
    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
    I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums

  4. #4
    Newbie articfrezze may be famous one day articfrezze may be famous one day articfrezze's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    Indiana
    Posts
    17
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Trust

    sweet words man, the words flow brillently

  5. #5
    Devoted Otaku BlueFox1 may be famous one day BlueFox1 may be famous one day BlueFox1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
    Posts
    585
    Thanks
    9
    Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts

    Re: Trust

    Hey Bro!

    Awesome poem! My favorite stanza from this poem is

    So as i walk away from you i will say i am sorry,
    but will i mean it like the rumore's say i don't
    but dosnt matter anyway because word's don't
    mean a thing to me ,only you heart does and you're
    freindship.

    It get right down to the point you are making! Awesome job Bro!

  6. #6
    Sorrow's Angel Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD
    Posts
    688
    Thanks
    40
    Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts

    Re: Trust

    Omg,Wow! This was sooooooo awesome big bro! I just love it! And what you wrote about is so true.Some people do really hide their selfs from others but I think it's cause their scared of not being loved for the real way they are.But all in all,awesome poem as always.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

  7. #7
    Newbie Sailor_Saturn may be famous one day Sailor_Saturn may be famous one day Sailor_Saturn's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    Altoona, Pennsylvania
    Posts
    72
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Trust

    This is a very powerful piece of poetry. Deep and thoughtful from my perspective. I think it's exellently written with the perfect words.

    "Along with death...hope and rebirth can begin." -Sailor Saturn

  8. #8
    Fish Fingers & Custard Ice Hockey Champion, Smaugs Treasure Champion, Mini Putt 3 Champion, Ant Tracks Champion, Jungle Hunt Champion, Madnetics Champion, Manole Champion, Blokken Champion, Fast Food Fiasco Champion, Shapes Hifters Champion, Mud and Blood: Vietnam Champion HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Location
    someplace where the only light is the moon above
    Posts
    3,118
    Thanks
    102
    Thanked 70 Times in 64 Posts

    Re: Trust

    thank you eberyone i am glad you all liked this poem
    and i also aprecait the comments as well its been a while since
    i have done one that people could relate to or understand.

    @ sis thanks for your comment and you are right
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. A trust that was broken!
    By HolderOfTheDarkChalice in forum Poems
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: Sep 07, 2006, 05:52 AM
  2. Do you trust people on the net?
    By animemeanime in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 42
    Last Post: Mar 10, 2006, 02:16 PM
  3. how can you gain your trust again???
    By jeilee in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 37
    Last Post: Feb 08, 2006, 04:06 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts