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    trust

    I look at your eyes to see a
    reaction.
    All I see is in them no
    satisfaction.
    I see sadness I see
    hurt.
    How much was our love
    worth?
    Was it worth what I just
    did?
    To tell you now what I had
    hid.
    You are the fist I have
    told
    How dare you be so
    cold
    I trusted you I thought you would
    understand.
    I though you would comfort me and hold my
    hand.
    Instead you judge and push me
    away.
    I love you it wasn't suppose to be this
    way!
    Here I am, sensing your
    disapproval
    Don't worry you will have my permanent
    removal,
    From your life, from your heart, and from your
    mind.
    But even after this you in my heart I will always
    find.
    Last edited by sangogirl; Feb 23, 2007 at 04:15 PM.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: trust

    This is really sad.. this goes reaolly well with what you were feeling..
    Thank you Lasura!
    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: trust

    Quote Originally Posted by rksamurai View Post
    This is really sad.. this goes reaolly well with what you were feeling..
    i made the whole thing up i wasn't really feeling this way. (well maybe just a little with the whole alex thing) but nothing like what i made the poem sound like.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: trust

    great work sangogirl,

    such sadness in it made me think about some one u i used to date
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    Re: trust

    Spelling mistakes. Some ^_^

    Keep practicing and you'll do great =D
    It's not so sad ^_^

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    Re: trust

    The was a good poem sangogirl! Capturing the feeling of telling someone how you feel and them throwing your emotions right back at you in spite! I like the wording of this poem! There are a couple of spelling mistakes but overall a great poem!

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    Re: trust

    I thought it was a great poem it goes deep into a person who has ever had a broken heart after saying something that they wish that they could take back.
    I love beautiful carnage.

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    Re: trust

    hey thanks for telling me about the misspelling. I fixed them now though (at least I think that was all).
    every rose has a thorn

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