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    Trust?

    I loved you
    I trusted you
    I believe you
    I wanted you to be
    with me
    for an eternity
    it seemed

    I thought you were
    perfect
    I thought you were the greatest thing ever
    But I was wrong

    You had well
    fans
    I had nothing
    but good friends

    We were good friends
    then it turned into something
    else
    something more

    My life felt complete
    it seemed
    because I fell in
    love
    with you

    But now I was
    wrong
    dead wrong

    Now I know your
    true self
    now I know
    you're nothing more
    than a casnova

    I should've listened to
    the warnings but didn't
    but I'm not hurt

    I won't be hurt by
    someone like you
    ever..

    Not now
    not ever.

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    Re: Trust?

    awwwww thats it such a coolies poem it soos easy to relate to ^__^

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    Re: Trust?

    trust isnt given easy nor is it taken lightly
    when the one who has it say they will never
    betray that trust . but its when that trust is betrayed
    things can get bad.

    for this reaosn trust should be a rare thing so when
    gave to someone they will aprcaite it more , this poem
    really expresses that and that why i love it you did really great on
    this poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Trust?

    Good poem, it is very easy to relate to. More detail would have made it wonderful, but it's still good. ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Trust?

    Indeed I could relate to it easily...
    The only part I couldn't realeate to was:
    I won't be hurt by
    someone like you
    ever..
    sadly...
    Now onto the poem itself. i liked this poem, enjoyed reading it... it's always nice to make sure you're not alone... Again I must say I don't like the way you bring the text in another line... confusing... or maybe i just don't know English good enough...
    A nice work I think... i know I couldn't express feelings this stron in a poem so good..

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Trust?

    This pome does bring back some old memories that I did have, However that is in the past. I have to say that trust may be hard for some people who did have a ruff relationship which I had. Therefore it is hard for me to tust anyone. I do really like this pome since it does hit a nerve about myself.

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    Re: Trust?

    nice poem and mabye in this poem feel many feeling
    sad
    lone
    hurt
    and many things other feeling ...but it's very nice ...
    hope to see more form you ...more

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Trust?

    Sounds like you were really hurt. But you expressed that feeling very well. Even the way it was built and set up makes it feel unstable. You did a great job though. Cuts right to the heart.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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