Thread: Trust?

awwwww thats it such a coolies poem it soos easy to relate to ^__^

trust isnt given easy nor is it taken lightly
when the one who has it say they will never
betray that trust . but its when that trust is betrayed
things can get bad.

for this reaosn trust should be a rare thing so when
gave to someone they will aprcaite it more , this poem
really expresses that and that why i love it you did really great on
this poem.

Good poem, it is very easy to relate to. More detail would have made it wonderful, but it's still good. ^-^

Indeed I could relate to it easily...
The only part I couldn't realeate to was:

I won't be hurt by
someone like you
ever..

sadly...
Now onto the poem itself. i liked this poem, enjoyed reading it... it's always nice to make sure you're not alone... Again I must say I don't like the way you bring the text in another line... confusing... or maybe i just don't know English good enough...
A nice work I think... i know I couldn't express feelings this stron in a poem so good..

This pome does bring back some old memories that I did have, However that is in the past. I have to say that trust may be hard for some people who did have a ruff relationship which I had. Therefore it is hard for me to tust anyone. I do really like this pome since it does hit a nerve about myself.

nice poem and mabye in this poem feel many feeling
sad
lone
hurt
and many things other feeling ...but it's very nice ...
hope to see more form you ...more

Sounds like you were really hurt. But you expressed that feeling very well. Even the way it was built and set up makes it feel unstable. You did a great job though. Cuts right to the heart.