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Reply With QuoteLove the poem. Great imagery, and well put.
However, "Trust"?
Flecks upon flecks.
Grain piled on grain.
Slowly yet surely,
It's building back up.
Tiny grains.
The little things.
Those are what really matter.
Soon you'll have a beautiful beach.
Or maybe even a small wasteland.
But our wasteland will be plentiful.
A happy little oasis.
Come, lets dance in the sun.
Alright. Thanks for reading. THat is all!
>^.^< Hope you enjoyed!!
Love the poem. Great imagery, and well put.
However, "Trust"?
Why thank you. ^.^Originally Posted by The White Wolf
Oh...Hee. That's what it's about? Or rather what I was thinking about while writing it.
OOHHH WOW!!!!!!!!! Really nice poem you made with that imaginary place cool! And it seems like a love poem well to me but I loved it! Hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
i liked it, and can relate to it, so 2 thumbs up bro.
touch the untouchable, break the unbreakable, raw raw fight the powah
Thanka you, but I'ma girl
And thank the rest of you for your input too.Glad you liked it. This one is my favorite too I think.
Hey bratling this is a favortie of mine so far too. and another thing is I believe it. you have some good things in this poem and I can realte to it alot. you are a darn good writer bratling. Your poems are cool.
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
Wow thank you much.I intend on writing more often so you might see at least some of it soon.
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