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    trust

    Flecks upon flecks.
    Grain piled on grain.
    Slowly yet surely,
    It's building back up.
    Tiny grains.
    The little things.
    Those are what really matter.
    Soon you'll have a beautiful beach.
    Or maybe even a small wasteland.
    But our wasteland will be plentiful.
    A happy little oasis.
    Come, lets dance in the sun.


    Alright. Thanks for reading. THat is all!
    >^.^< Hope you enjoyed!!

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    Re: trust

    Love the poem. Great imagery, and well put.

    However, "Trust"?

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    Quote Originally Posted by The White Wolf View Post
    Love the poem. Great imagery, and well put.

    However, "Trust"?
    Why thank you. ^.^

    Oh...Hee. That's what it's about? Or rather what I was thinking about while writing it.

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    OOHHH WOW!!!!!!!!! Really nice poem you made with that imaginary place cool! And it seems like a love poem well to me but I loved it! Hope to see more!
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    Re: trust

    i liked it, and can relate to it, so 2 thumbs up bro.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Vandread_Dita View Post
    i liked it, and can relate to it, so 2 thumbs up bro.
    Thanka you, but I'ma girl


    And thank the rest of you for your input too. Glad you liked it. This one is my favorite too I think.

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    Re: trust

    Hey bratling this is a favortie of mine so far too. and another thing is I believe it. you have some good things in this poem and I can realte to it alot. you are a darn good writer bratling. Your poems are cool.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    Hey bratling this is a favortie of mine so far too. and another thing is I believe it. you have some good things in this poem and I can realte to it alot. you are a darn good writer bratling. Your poems are cool.
    Wow thank you much. I intend on writing more often so you might see at least some of it soon.

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