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    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Wow thank you much. I intend on writing more often so you might see at least some of it soon.
    I think that this one is my favorite thus far. I especially like your word-play. It confuses the reader; makes them go, "Trust? Huh? I don't under--OOOHH!! I get it!!" ^_^ Good job, girly.


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    Good poem Blahblahblah ..im bored..peace... 50 cahracters ok


    Blahblahblah BlaBlahblahblah hblahblah Blahblahblah Blahblahblah Blahblahblah Blahblahblah there i better fill those 50 characters

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    Well i did enjoyed reading it including the beach of oasis it really made me comfort there and i would like to keep on reading and as well try being smoothly even out the past treasure of trust but rarely trust begins with an abstract of friends being there when they need it try making it real but i would like to see more in the future your very dedicating on this poem and that is effort to me i really enjoyed it.

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    Thats a really nice pome but still whats it got to do with trust?I just dont get that part.Other than that great poem good job!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Little negi sensei View Post
    Thats a really nice pome but still whats it got to do with trust?I just dont get that part.Other than that great poem good job!
    That's what it's about. Or rather that's what it started about. The whole grain of sand tihng? Trust. Builds piece by piece. Get it now?

    I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks.

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    Yes, your very welcome and also i was hoping if you can describe more about the trust being build up by the sand of hope you were talking about to dear little negi sensei if you would be so kind to explain to me about. ^-^

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    Yes, your very welcome and also i was hoping if you can describe more about the trust being build up by the sand of hope you were talking about to dear little negi sensei if you would be so kind to explain to me about. ^-^
    Trust...isn't just there. At least for me. And it has to be built. And for me trust is really hard. I've never been shown someone who diserves much trust. I've been lied to my entier life by people who were supposed to be there to protect me. So when dealing with trsut myself it comes in very very small doses. Babysteps. Grains of sand. Piling on top of each other until we have a semblance of trust. Or at least a begaining.

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    A very good poem just try and make it longer next time i hope you write more and take my advice

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