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    Trust and believe

    Trust in me...

    Trust in the fact that I love you.
    Trust in my dependability.
    Trust me because I trust you.

    Please, trust me...

    When I say that I need you.
    When I say you are the only one... My only one.
    Trust me when I say your feelings
    always have and always will come first.

    Believe me...

    Because I will always be here for you.
    I will always defend you... US!
    I will protect you and keep you from harm.
    Believe me when I tell you that I will
    never hurt you again.

    Have faith...

    Have faith in us.
    Have faith in me and believe that
    my love for you has not died or diminished.
    Know AND feel that, because you are
    so important to me, that as long as
    we're together, you will never have to worry...

    Because for you, I would do anything.
    Because for you, I would give my right hand...


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    Re: Trust and believe

    Trust... An under rated notion people over look when it comes to the acts of love... I always believed you couldn't have one without the other... And to believe in someone you would have to put your trust in them... When people doesn't have either of them that's when the lack of faith comes into play...

    These are exact words that I would tell a certain someone when doubt comes at hand & words I should of said way back then... Another shoulda', woulda', coulda', moment...

    I like this cause you wrote what most people who care for someone & don't know what to tell them when chips are down you have said... You gave that person reassurance & sometimes that's all a person needs...

    Another work of your I like as always... Keep up your writing frenzy' lol cause you keep producing quality work... ^_^

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Trust and believe

    Quote Originally Posted by Inuruto View Post
    Trust... An under rated notion people over look when it comes to the acts of love... I always believed you couldn't have one without the other... And to believe in someone you would have to put your trust in them... When people doesn't have either of them that's when the lack of faith comes into play...

    These are exact words that I would tell a certain someone when doubt comes at hand & words I should of said way back then... Another shoulda', woulda', coulda', moment...

    I like this cause you wrote what most people who care for someone & don't know what to tell them when chips are down you have said... You gave that person reassurance & sometimes that's all a person needs...

    Another work of your I like as always... Keep up your writing frenzy' lol cause you keep producing quality work... ^_^
    Thanks a ton! I'm glad you like my work so much. It's people like you, bratling, RayMe and Lasura that keep me writing these days. Were it not for your constant support and comments, I'd probably just stick to drawing. ^_^

    Thanks again!


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    Re: Trust and believe

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Thanks a ton! I'm glad you like my work so much. It's people like you, bratling, RayMe and Lasura that keep me writing these days. Were it not for your constant support and comments, I'd probably just stick to drawing. ^_^

    Thanks again!
    Aww ^^ my name is there!!!! I'm glad to hear that and I'll keep on supportin u!!!

    Now to the poem... It was just beautiful!!!! A really, really good work done Sprout ^^ Now I understand why Ray said I should read your newest poems... This is great and worth spenind time on (reading again and again)...

    And reminded me of what we talked about yesterday and somehow made me trust in my relationship too... ^^ Well thank you for that I guess.

    Anyways- a great work done!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    I like the style the way you separate things in to sections with titles! WoW! I love your work! so inspiring Keep up the good work! I cant wait to see more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Trust and believe

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Aww ^^ my name is there!!!! I'm glad to hear that and I'll keep on supportin u!!!

    Now to the poem... It was just beautiful!!!! A really, really good work done Sprout ^^ Now I understand why Ray said I should read your newest poems... This is great and worth spenind time on (reading again and again)...

    And reminded me of what we talked about yesterday and somehow made me trust in my relationship too... ^^ Well thank you for that I guess.

    Anyways- a great work done!!!
    To be quite honest, it was our conversation AND the conversation I had with bratling yesterday that pretty much sparked this poem! I should be thanking you! LOL. Here goes, "Thanks!" I greatly appreciate your support!
    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    I like the style the way you separate things in to sections with titles! WoW! I love your work! so inspiring Keep up the good work! I cant wait to see more!
    And thanks to you too, highteck! Y'know, I knew I was forgetting to add someone when I listed names earlier on this thread. I don't think you've missed a single poem since you started reading my newer stuff. I'm glad you like my writing so much! ^_^


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    Re: Trust and believe

    Wow, I liked the wording in this poem. It's a really thoughtful and very well written piece. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Trust and believe

    *scratches my head* hmm.. who is rayme? Lasura... could you tell me whose that? I never seen him posting around... but weird...his credits.. and all is so many @.@

    Hmm... a very nice and well written poem again i must say.. your brain is working like a machine~! how can you produce this many poems in such short time...impressed i must say...and all of them are high quality such as this one...

    a very nice style... i like it ^^ keep it up

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