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    A trust that was broken!

    All this time as i sit here
    by your side i have doubts
    about my love for you,it isnt that
    complicated just open your eye's.

    All the rumours and the lie's
    make me tired of all the things
    i thought were what i wanted,
    nothing could be further from the
    truth,i wish i felt different but i can't.

    You think your so smart you
    say you love me and you
    never did anything wrong
    but the truth be known you're more
    guilty than you led me to belive i bet.

    But there's something you forgot
    i dont trust that easily ,heres what i mean
    by that ,I can see through you ,see you're
    true colour's see the real you and you're
    ugly on the inside ugly like me.

    You can make all the smiles and fake smiles all
    you want but i know better than you ,your lies
    dont work on me anymore,how i wished i
    never met you, it may sound harsh and unkind
    but what i say is true, no more trust i have for you.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    heh this good and you could write more of this you know? very good though much better than mine, which i didnt typed on here yet
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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    hmph (concentrate)

    this is very good and darklish type..
    is sweet!



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    Burn much?

    >.< what do you say to Poems like these?

    Nothing much really.

    I like it, its right, so its there.

    I like it, but you could have down better with the wording.
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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    Hmm this 1 was a bit darkish and sad all at the sametime.But all in all,it was a very good poem big bro.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    Eventhough you don't wanna be with me anymore did not give you the right to write about me like I'm such a cruel person which I'm not despite what you may think.

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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    Hmmm......do I sense potential Jerry Springer moment.........yessssssss I do..........
    Anyways, keep up the dramatic poetry and.............Wierd how some ppl here seem to actually be dating and breaking up on here...............O_o
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    Re: A trust that was broken!

    wow...................really harsh.......................but great poem............

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