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Reply With QuoteMan, this poem is real great. It has a spunky rhyme to it and everything. Made me scream like ther girl I am. And its sends its message perfectly too. It describes how it feels to have a low tolerency for bullsh*t.
Reach down into your soul and bring forth the truth .
Do you love me? Do you care?
How can you sit there,
and only stare?
You are a lie.
There is no truth.
You took my inocence,
and my youth
You said you loved me,
But that was a lie.
I wanted you back,
but why even try?
You'll only betray me,
I'll only get hurt,
it will go back to me being dirt.
So I'm moving on
And you can go die,
I'm not gonna stay here and live this lie.
Man, this poem is real great. It has a spunky rhyme to it and everything. Made me scream like ther girl I am. And its sends its message perfectly too. It describes how it feels to have a low tolerency for bullsh*t.
... Not Ever Again...
thanksOriginally Posted by Peach_follows
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Wow. I liked your other work that I read so far but I like this one best. The flow and rhyming is so lovely and the feeling is so deeply felt. I think it's fantastic. Keep it up.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
CBtay01 (Nov 24, 2008)
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