+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: Truth

  1. #1
    The Listener Stealin` Home Champion awesomeparty12 may be famous one day awesomeparty12's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    my mind crawls wih eagerness
    Posts
    675
    Thanks
    169
    Thanked 72 Times in 67 Posts

    Truth

    truth is found beneath white lies
    truth is known to make you cry
    truth is sutle yet complete
    truth can make a mans heart beat
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

  2. #2
    Devoted Otaku Alucard_ML may be famous one day Alucard_ML may be famous one day Alucard_ML's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Location
    Wonderland... Blood For Everyone!!
    Posts
    616
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 22 Times in 22 Posts

    Re: Truth

    Sounds like a simple but still very catchy poem, it allmost looks like it's ot easy for you maybe you should try and challenge yourself.... Nicely done

  3. The Following User Says Thank You to Alucard_ML For This Useful Post:

    awesomeparty12 (Jan 13, 2009)

  4. #3
    Otaku crimson is off to a good start crimson's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Philippines
    Posts
    386
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts

    Re: Truth

    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    truth is found beneath white lies
    truth is known to make you cry
    truth is sutle yet complete
    truth can make a mans heart beat
    nice poem... it is able to tell what it wants in a mere 4 lines... great work. ^^,
    i can feel the emotion and the intensity of the feel...

    a jump to the technical side:
    the word is spelled subtle...

    but aside from the technical mistake... i love the peom... it can be something you can attach to your notebook or your wallet to read as an inspiration.

    keep it up! ^^,
    i'll choose to love whoever i wish to love and nobody can stop me from doing so ----

    crimson
    edited from SamBakZa.net

  5. #4
    Fallen Angel of Darkness mangalovertje may be famous one day mangalovertje may be famous one day mangalovertje's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    Somewhere I can be at peace...With my mind and my heart...In the Darkness...
    Posts
    1,113
    Thanks
    37
    Thanked 40 Times in 37 Posts

    Re: Truth

    That is so true your poem...
    But most of the people are affraid of the truth...
    Cause truth can hurt very badly..
    And we 'people'..are trying to avoid that...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

  6. #5
    Otaku Robo Soccer Champion, Gorillaz Groove Session Champion blackrose92 is off to a good start blackrose92's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Texas
    Posts
    484
    Thanks
    69
    Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts

    Re: Truth

    i like it^^ it was realley nice=]...but what you say is oh so true! but i dont know i guess there's somthing deeper than that simplicity
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. truth
    By AGAki in forum Poems
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: Jun 03, 2008, 08:42 PM
  2. truth about me
    By tupacs_wifey in forum Poems
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Aug 25, 2006, 05:44 AM
  3. truth or lie
    By equinn in forum The Chat Forum
    Replies: 51
    Last Post: Jul 08, 2006, 02:26 AM
  4. Truth?
    By RPGirl in forum The Chat Forum
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: Jun 15, 2006, 04:43 PM
  5. truth or lie
    By equinn in forum The Chat Forum
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: Jun 10, 2006, 12:06 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts