Thread: Truth Hurts the Unknown

Originally Posted by kenchi18

Trickles of water
Effortlessly down the stream
Is my paradise

Nature is calling
Soft whispers of tomorrow
Life is a stand still

Nothing is concealed
No where to hide near me now
Truth hurts the unknown

Ooops made extra post sorry dude's for wasting a forum.

This poem sends me many messages and wat's great about it is that its short. Not many ppl can put themes into just 3 stanzas (well i can't anywayz). Good job