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Reply With QuoteIt sounds like you don't feel the same you once did.
Nice poem, sprout. Keep it up.
Try to understand
that I didn't want to fight.
I didn't want drama
on the phone every night.
Try to comprehend
my reasons for staying away.
I was so sick and tired
of playing those games.
Try and realize
that I didn't mean you harm.
But did you have to cling
like you're hanging on my arm?
Try to understand.
I don't like to fuss and fight.
Once we make peace,
everything will be alright.
It sounds like you don't feel the same you once did.
Nice poem, sprout. Keep it up.
Thanks! ^_^Originally Posted by The White Wolf
When I was in the process of writing this, I didn't know where I wanted to go with it; until I finally realized that I wasn't upset anymore.
veey cool poem i remember my first argumet
on the phone with my gf when i was your age
ahh the memorys its cute ad funny now becuase
we both saw things like we were both right and the
other should aplogise lol. anyway though this poem
is really great and with how you were using your
emotions for some of it i think that was great.
and keep up the awesome writing because poems
like this really do hit a nerv with some people and i am
defanantly going to copy this poem for a future read
if you dont mind of course but i like this one alot.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Aw, yes, you finally left all those behind. Your poems tells a story, about your feelings very clearly. I adore rhymes >_< Good job.
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