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Apr 03, 2007, 08:14 PM
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 Credits: 205 | Trying Trying not to lose grip. I hold on tight. Trying to scream but my screams can't be heard. Hanging on to your hand slowly slipping away......... Praying I will wake from this nightmare... Opening my eyes seeing you sliping through my hands... Trying to grab hold But falling faster... I never saw you falling blinded by my own deceit.... I couldn't I couldnt see you falling from my grip till it was to late... ummmmmmmmmmm......well its short but i hope yall like it lol I could really figer out what to write i guess cuz i wrote it like months ago but hope yall enjoy it...
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Apr 04, 2007, 01:25 AM
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: Trying <woot> Although it is a short poem fredsboo it's still a good one! Keep writing and I'm sure that you poems become even more amazing in time! I'll be looking for the next one from you soon! 
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Apr 04, 2007, 05:54 AM
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 I like the first two lines. I've actually started one of my poems out similar to the way you did. It's more of a story poem because it goes on forever. I'll have to find it and post it here for you to read. Anyway, I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more. 
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Apr 04, 2007, 06:01 AM
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Credits: 205 | Re: Trying Well thanx yall Im glad yall liked it n that would be nice to see the one you wrote.........Im happy yall liked it 
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Apr 04, 2007, 06:13 AM
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Credits: 3,363 | Re: Trying Awesome as always my dearest friend!! Emotion,emotion,emotion!! Lovely lol. Can't wait 2 see more!! Great job!!
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Apr 04, 2007, 06:17 AM
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Credits: 205 | Re: Trying Thanx shini lol Im glad you liked it I was hopein you would lol
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Apr 07, 2007, 06:36 PM
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