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    Trying to write...

    What kind of poem to write?
    No one reads my poems on a fight.
    My ninjutsu,
    don't get read too....

    I can write on love,
    but I'm alone right now.
    My heart too broken,
    and I'm alone somehow.

    If that son of a gun...
    ok Justin concentrate...
    You have to write a poem,
    so stay out of that state.

    He's been a plague long enough,
    and you don't need anymore.
    That stuff has to go,
    so don't think of the idiot and his.....

    Don't get mad,
    just close your eyes...
    think of the dream girl,
    you hold inside.

    She's the one that you want,
    and the for you'll care for.
    So write about her,
    and you'll continue to write more.

    Ok Justin,
    sit at the keys now.
    It's time for you,
    to figure this junk out.

    Think of that place,
    where you first met her.
    The first dream of dreams,
    that wrote your forever.

    The poem that started it all,
    and continued to keep you from a fall.
    The one that kept you straight,
    and kept you from hate.

    Now the keys sing,
    as i type along.
    If I write about writing,
    am I truely wrong?


    White Rose

    "A poem can be anthing you want it to be, rhyming or not. I choose whichever works."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Trying to write...

    I liked it. A poem about writing a poem... very orignal. I liked how you talked to yourself through out. Well done (minus a few errors).
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    Re: Trying to write...

    Yeah... I kind of need to proofread. My flaw, lol. Thanks for reading it though.

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    Re: Trying to write...

    wow... nice style.. i liked it... very good indeed ^^ i wrote one abt writing a poem too... but ur's way better.. ^^

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