Thread: Tunnels

Watchu mean you dont recognize that woman!? You better recognize!

Nah, Im joking. The "pulls at my soul" part. Is something I have heard before in conjuction with the experience of Sally.

I also strongly relate to wondering if it was me... that couldn't go.... As you could probably tell, I really wanted to experience not being here. But.... Didn't work out so hot. "Is 'reality' the true drug?"... Good question. Makes me ponder the commonly used phrase... "Get real". Everybody is getting real... But how? Whos the pusher? Who am I buying my reality from? And what price am I paying?

If I didn't know what inspired this I might find it even more profound. Don't let that statement detract from how profound I found this to be honest. I liked this a lot. The way you write is interesting and a little different then what I'm used to. Not to mention the way this made me feel. Very interesting.

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Watchu mean you dont recognize that woman!? You better recognize!

Nah, Im joking. The "pulls at my soul" part. Is something I have heard before in conjuction with the experience of Sally.

I also strongly relate to wondering if it was me... that couldn't go.... As you could probably tell, I really wanted to experience not being here. But.... Didn't work out so hot. "Is 'reality' the true drug?"... Good question. Makes me ponder the commonly used phrase... "Get real". Everybody is getting real... But how? Whos the pusher? Who am I buying my reality from? And what price am I paying?

Well, the answer to what price are you paying is simple: True freedom from this world. As far as who is pushing "reality" thats more complex. Maybe it's "the people". Maybe it's everybody, we all sell our own reality to people every time we have some kind of interaction.

Originally Posted by bratling

If I didn't know what inspired this I might find it even more profound. Don't let that statement detract from how profound I found this to be honest. I liked this a lot. The way you write is interesting and a little different then what I'm used to. Not to mention the way this made me feel. Very interesting.

So, how did it make you feel? What about my writing is different?

Originally Posted by bratling

If I didn't know what inspired this I might find it even more profound. Don't let that statement detract from how profound I found this to be honest. I liked this a lot. The way you write is interesting and a little different then what I'm used to. Not to mention the way this made me feel. Very interesting.

So, how did it make you feel? What about my writing is different?

Mods please delete.

It makes me feel lost...but comforted at the same time. Like waking up not remembering where you fell asleep. But not in a scary unfamiliar sorta way.

Your writing is different then most I'm used to reading (especially around here) because you don't seem to care/think about the whole rhyming thing. You flow, and all. But it almost seems unintentional.