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    turn around

    i know u have been hurt
    i know how u feel
    i have gone throught the same thing.

    but i know u feel alone
    like no one cares.
    but that's where ur wrong.

    i care....
    i love u
    and for ever tear u shed
    my heart breaks a little

    just turn around
    i'll be there
    if u need me
    just call
    if ur hurt
    i'll protect u.

    so turn around
    and let me wipe away ur tears
    and don't be sad
    i'm here
    so u have nothing to fear

    do u like it ? tell me
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    Re: turn around

    It's good, it's very good and it's not too long... Nice job

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    Re: turn around

    Oh... such a lovely poem... right in time to make me feel better (don't worry, I don't think it's for me )... And so good... A great work!!!!!!!!! A great work indeed!!!
    The theme... I know how that feels, I hope that, if this poem is to someone in reall life, everything comes out well and your good will is evaluated!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: turn around

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Oh... such a lovely poem... right in time to make me feel better (don't worry, I don't think it's for me )... And so good... A great work!!!!!!!!! A great work indeed!!!
    The theme... I know how that feels, I hope that, if this poem is to someone in reall life, everything comes out well and your good will is evaluated!!!
    thank u both i love the replys. my parents love the poems i wrote so i'm going to post more if i can!!!
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    Re: turn around

    love the poem hope you do post more as it will be great to hear something new

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    Re: turn around

    Great poem excellent indeed!!!! It's a amazing how much you'll protect your love rally it's just so romantic!!! Hope to see more!!!!
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