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    Twisted

    Twisted,
    By placing my trust in another,
    You came, knowing that I hated,
    Hated being alone, having no other.

    Taking advantage of my emotions,
    Trying to make me like you, cruel and heartless,
    With no other notion,
    Than the pleasure of making another souless.

    At first giving you my trust,
    Not realizing your intenton,
    You turned my soul to rust,
    Nothing left but tension.

    Now you're gone,
    Not before twisting my mind, making me souless,
    Because of you I'm done,
    For trusting another I've become heartless.

    You used me,
    Then you left me,
    You took what you needed from me,
    And then you ditched me.

    Never again,
    Will I trust another,
    There's nothing to gain,
    By having an other.

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    Re: Twisted

    Thats deep. And with a sence of cruelty...What am I talking about? Cool peom.

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    Re: Twisted

    By placing my trust in another,
    You came, knowing that I hated,
    Hated being alone, having no other.
    ^ My favourite quote. It sends the audience an initial insight to the soul purpose of the poem. A neccesity indeed. ^_^
    As I've commented in many other poems- This is definitely something the majority can relate to.
    Your technique is flawless. The flow and atmosphere of 'Loss', 'hatred' and 'Regret' is maintained all throughout.

    I am absolutely addicted to your work. Harsh and cruel, hehe. ^^
    Very inspiring. I eagerly await your next creation.

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    Re: Twisted

    Quote Originally Posted by Reese
    As I've commented in many other poems- This is definitely something the majority can relate to.
    Your technique is flawless. The flow and atmosphere of 'Loss', 'hatred' and 'Regret' is maintained all throughout.

    I am absolutely addicted to your work. Harsh and cruel, hehe. ^^
    Very inspiring. I eagerly await your next creation.
    Thanks Reese. My technique is flawless? Wow! What a praise!!! I'm starting
    to become addicted to your comments of my work. Very gratifying. By the way, I read into one of yours and it was superb. The Forsaken, a very amazing poem. If you keep up work like that, I'll start PMing you all the time asking when you're gonna make another. Anyway, thanks for the comment Reese. ^^
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