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    Twisted Love Memories

    Here's a new song that I wrote today. I'm sooo happy that I finally got something new written lol.Sorry if it's a bit long and all.I hope that everyone enjoys it.Please read and comment.Thank you *bows*

    Title-Twisted Love Memories

    I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
    Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
    Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
    I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...

    "Just like my Broken Heart"

    I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
    This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
    We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
    Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...

    "My Heart is torn between Hate and Love"

    I review my Memories,It's like watching a Twisted movie
    My Memories of you are a cruel burdend,But some of them are joyful and full of Love
    I wish that you would have stayed and tryed one more time,For both of our sakes
    The Pain that I have all inside wants release,I just want to scream out my Sorrows!...

    "Twisted Memories,Sorrowful Screams"

    My Body wants you back,Lust
    My Eyes wish to see you again,Painful
    My Heart longs for your return,Cursed
    My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!...

    "Tainted Being,Unholy Soul"

    I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
    This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
    We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
    Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...

    "My Heart is torn between Hate and Love.All for You."

    I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
    Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
    Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
    I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...

    "Just like my helpless Broken Heart,it's dieing slowly."
    "Lust,Pain,Hate,Love.These are my Memories of You."
    "These are my Twisted Love Memories."...
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    wow sis this was cool and i loveed the pain
    you showed here ,l;ove can truly be cruel and
    you show it well here,if only love wasnt so painfull,but then again
    if it wasnt you would never find the one that was meant for you
    no matter who they are guy/girl there out there for you .
    very awesome song sis and i enjoyed the song very much
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    Thank you soooooooo very much Big bro I'd soo glad that you loved my song. And i'm very happy that I could make my song where you could feel the emotions from it lol And that is so very true.
    Thank you again and i'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much.
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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    i am glad to sis and i could realy relate to this thats what made me enjoy this song so much
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    That's reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good!! I REALLY like your writing style. Keep up the good work, and I believe you could be the one of the top poets at AO!! (With hinata89 <3)
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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    WOW! Very good! *Claps and gives you a cookie~ I love it!
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    Come to the dark side we have cookies!

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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    Thank you soooooooo very much Tsubasa-chan! *hugs* I'm glad that you also like my writting style.Wow you really think so?! Awesome lol

    And thank you sooooo very much Heavy_metal_goddess! *hugs* *takes cookie* And thank you for the cookie also. I'm very happy that you loved my song.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Twisted Love Memories

    So sad! *cries* i like it cos you describe everything with a lot of detail. It shows true emotions. oh and i loved this line "My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!..." u evil *beep* lol haha jk. so u want vengeance? ask god to smite him

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