Here's a new song that I wrote today.I'm sooo happy that I finally got something new written lol.Sorry if it's a bit long and all.I hope that everyone enjoys it.Please read and comment.Thank you *bows*
Title-Twisted Love Memories
I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...
"Just like my Broken Heart"
I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...
"My Heart is torn between Hate and Love"
I review my Memories,It's like watching a Twisted movie
My Memories of you are a cruel burdend,But some of them are joyful and full of Love
I wish that you would have stayed and tryed one more time,For both of our sakes
The Pain that I have all inside wants release,I just want to scream out my Sorrows!...
"Twisted Memories,Sorrowful Screams"
My Body wants you back,Lust
My Eyes wish to see you again,Painful
My Heart longs for your return,Cursed
My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!...
"Tainted Being,Unholy Soul"
I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...
"My Heart is torn between Hate and Love.All for You."
I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...
"Just like my helpless Broken Heart,it's dieing slowly."
"Lust,Pain,Hate,Love.These are my Memories of You."
"These are my Twisted Love Memories."...
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
wow sis this was cool and i loveed the pain
you showed here ,l;ove can truly be cruel and
you show it well here,if only love wasnt so painfull,but then again
if it wasnt you would never find the one that was meant for you
no matter who they are guy/girl there out there for you .
very awesome song sis and i enjoyed the song very much
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Thank you soooooooo very much Big bro
Thank you again and i'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much.
i am glad to sis and i could realy relate to this thats what made me enjoy this song so much
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That's reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good!! I REALLY like your writing style. Keep up the good work, and I believe you could be the one of the top poets at AO!! (With hinata89 <3)
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WOW! Very good! *Claps and gives you a cookie~ I love it!
Live as you'll die tomorrow and dream as you will live forever-James Dean
Come to the dark side we have cookies!
Thank you soooooooo very much Tsubasa-chan! *hugs*
And thank you sooooo very much Heavy_metal_goddess! *hugs*
So sad! *cries* i like it cos you describe everything with a lot of detail. It shows true emotions. oh and i loved this line "My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!..." u evil *beep* lol haha jk. so u want vengeance? ask god to smite him
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