Twisted Love Memories

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 19, 2006, 10:50 PM

Here's a new song that I wrote today.

I'm sooo happy that I finally got something new written lol.Sorry if it's a bit long and all.I hope that everyone enjoys it.Please read and comment.Thank you *bows*

Title-Twisted Love Memories

I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...

"Just like my Broken Heart"

I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...

"My Heart is torn between Hate and Love"

I review my Memories,It's like watching a Twisted movie
My Memories of you are a cruel burdend,But some of them are joyful and full of Love
I wish that you would have stayed and tryed one more time,For both of our sakes
The Pain that I have all inside wants release,I just want to scream out my Sorrows!...

"Twisted Memories,Sorrowful Screams"

My Body wants you back,Lust
My Eyes wish to see you again,Painful
My Heart longs for your return,Cursed
My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!...

"Tainted Being,Unholy Soul"

I watched you as you walked away,Away from me
This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me?
We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave?
Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!...

"My Heart is torn between Hate and Love.All for You."

I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me
Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone
Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain
I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black...

"Just like my helpless Broken Heart,it's dieing slowly."
"Lust,Pain,Hate,Love.These are my Memories of You."
"These are my Twisted Love Memories."...

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 19, 2006, 11:05 PM

wow sis this was cool and i loveed the pain
you showed here ,l;ove can truly be cruel and
you show it well here,if only love wasnt so painfull,but then again
if it wasnt you would never find the one that was meant for you
no matter who they are guy/girl there out there for you .
very awesome song sis and i enjoyed the song very much

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 19, 2006, 11:08 PM

Thank you soooooooo very much Big bro

I'd soo glad that you loved my song.

And i'm very happy that I could make my song where you could feel the emotions from it lol

And that is so very true.

Thank you again and i'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 19, 2006, 11:14 PM

i am glad to sis and i could realy relate to this thats what made me enjoy this song so much

Tsubasa-chan · Sep 20, 2006, 12:50 PM

That's reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good!! I REALLY like your writing style. Keep up the good work, and I believe you could be the one of the top poets at AO!! (With hinata89 <3)

Heavy_metal_goddess · Sep 20, 2006, 01:23 PM

WOW! Very good! *Claps and gives you a cookie~ I love it!

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 20, 2006, 03:24 PM

Thank you soooooooo very much Tsubasa-chan! *hugs*

I'm glad that you also like my writting style.Wow you really think so?! Awesome lol

And thank you sooooo very much Heavy_metal_goddess! *hugs*

*takes cookie* And thank you for the cookie also.

I'm very happy that you loved my song.

Yippy123 · Sep 20, 2006, 04:10 PM

So sad! *cries* i like it cos you describe everything with a lot of detail. It shows true emotions. oh and i loved this line "My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!..." u evil *beep* lol haha jk. so u want vengeance? ask god to smite him

HieisLove · Sep 20, 2006, 07:38 PM

I love your songs. For some reason they inspired me to write poems alot. Just like how great you are with your songs, I makes me love writing poetry. Good job again gurl! Your #1 fan Cierra.

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 21, 2006, 03:20 PM

@ Yippy123-Thank you so very much Yippy. *hugs*

I'm so glad that you liked it.

Hmmm,I just might ask god about that lol

@ HieisLove-Thank you sooooooooooooo very much Cierra! *big hug*

I'm very glad 2 know that I can inspire you 2 write,it makes me very happy 2 know that.

Wolf_of_the_North · Sep 21, 2006, 03:26 PM

wow...so morbid...AWESOME!!!! seriously though...this is amazing. You're writing is so wise and mature...well beyond your age. Keep writing, you have a wonderful gift!

Sep 19, 2006, 10:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,171	Twisted Love Memories Here's a new song that I wrote today. I'm sooo happy that I finally got something new written lol.Sorry if it's a bit long and all.I hope that everyone enjoys it.Please read and comment.Thank you bows Title-Twisted Love Memories I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black... "Just like my Broken Heart" I watched you as you walked away,Away from me This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me? We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave? Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!... "My Heart is torn between Hate and Love" I review my Memories,It's like watching a Twisted movie My Memories of you are a cruel burdend,But some of them are joyful and full of Love I wish that you would have stayed and tryed one more time,For both of our sakes The Pain that I have all inside wants release,I just want to scream out my Sorrows!... "Twisted Memories,Sorrowful Screams" My Body wants you back,Lust My Eyes wish to see you again,Painful My Heart longs for your return,Cursed My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!... "Tainted Being,Unholy Soul" I watched you as you walked away,Away from me This I don't understand,What have I done wrong to make you leave me? We each said some hurtful things,But why did you have to leave? Why couldn't we try to work things out again,How could you just give up and walk away from me?!... "My Heart is torn between Hate and Love.All for You." I'm so lonely,I wish somebody would just hold me Darkness has incased me,I'm all alone Sad and in such Pain,I think it's gonna Rain I stand in a garden of Roses and watch them wither away,As the turn Black... "Just like my helpless Broken Heart,it's dieing slowly." "Lust,Pain,Hate,Love.These are my Memories of You." "These are my Twisted Love Memories."... __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	Re: Twisted Love Memories wow sis this was cool and i loveed the pain you showed here ,l;ove can truly be cruel and you show it well here,if only love wasnt so painfull,but then again if it wasnt you would never find the one that was meant for you no matter who they are guy/girl there out there for you . very awesome song sis and i enjoyed the song very much __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,171	Re: Twisted Love Memories Thank you soooooooo very much Big bro I'd soo glad that you loved my song. And i'm very happy that I could make my song where you could feel the emotions from it lol And that is so very true. Thank you again and i'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	Re: Twisted Love Memories i am glad to sis and i could realy relate to this thats what made me enjoy this song so much __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Tsubasa-chan Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Somewhere over the Rainbow Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Twisted Love Memories That's reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good!! I REALLY like your writing style. Keep up the good work, and I believe you could be the one of the top poets at AO!! (With hinata89 <3) __________________ [ My Tokyopop ] [ GALAXY ANGEL ]
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Heavy_metal_goddess Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: Nevada Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 286	Re: Twisted Love Memories WOW! Very good! *Claps and gives you a cookie~ I love it! __________________ Live as you'll die tomorrow and dream as you will live forever-James Dean Come to the dark side we have cookies!
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,171	Re: Twisted Love Memories Thank you soooooooo very much Tsubasa-chan! hugs I'm glad that you also like my writting style.Wow you really think so?! Awesome lol And thank you sooooo very much Heavy_metal_goddess! hugs takes cookie And thank you for the cookie also. I'm very happy that you loved my song. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Yippy123 Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: England Posts: 30 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Twisted Love Memories So sad! cries i like it cos you describe everything with a lot of detail. It shows true emotions. oh and i loved this line "My Soul wishes for Revenge,Twisted!..." u evil beep lol haha jk. so u want vengeance? ask god to smite him
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HieisLove TOP DIVA KITTEN -purrs- Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a Runway Show Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,928	Re: Twisted Love Memories I love your songs. For some reason they inspired me to write poems alot. Just like how great you are with your songs, I makes me love writing poetry. Good job again gurl! Your #1 fan Cierra. __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,171	Re: Twisted Love Memories @ Yippy123-Thank you so very much Yippy. hugs I'm so glad that you liked it. Hmmm,I just might ask god about that lol @ HieisLove-Thank you sooooooooooooo very much Cierra! big hug I'm very glad 2 know that I can inspire you 2 write,it makes me very happy 2 know that. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Wolf_of_the_North Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Just a hopscotch away from Never Never Land... Posts: 112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 967	Re: Twisted Love Memories wow...so morbid...AWESOME!!!! seriously though...this is amazing. You're writing is so wise and mature...well beyond your age. Keep writing, you have a wonderful gift! __________________ DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP
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