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Nov 16, 2006, 10:20 PM
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 In The Arms Of My Lover  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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 Credits: 3,351 | Twisted Release Here's my newest song that I just got done with.It's took me sooo long 2 try 2 come up with a new song and finally i've done it lol.I hope that it came out okay and sorry if it's a bit long.Please read and comment.Thank you *bows*.  Title-Twisted Release I'd rather feel nothing,Instead of this Pain I'm sick of these feelings,I'd rather be Numb again I wish that I was Blind,So I wouldn't have to see anything I'd rather freeze,Than take this fake warmth!... "Wipe that Fake smile off of your Face!" Why must I hide like this? Why must I hide this Pain that I have inside? It's Raining again,I'm crying inside once again I'm not sure how much longer I can hold on,I'm slipping Everything is so far away,How can I reach what can not be seen?... "Running through the Rain,Trying to Escape" Numb,I don't want to feel anything at all Silence,I wish to hear it nomore Tear's,I'm Cryin and i'm Diein on the inside Blind,I can't stand the sight of you anymore!... "Shut your eyes and dive into the Darkness!" I want to drown in the Darkness,I'd rather Fade away Let it consume me,There's nothin left for me here Let go of me,Release me Tonight I wish to be Free,That's what I Believe... "Release the Darkness that I hold in my Heart!" Angel's come to me,Take me away Capture my Heart,Now tear it apart I don't want to feel anymore,I want to be Numb Freeze my Belief's and Destroy my Emotion's!... "Destroy all of me,Take it all away" I long to fly in the Night sky,It's calling me My heart begs for Release,It crys all through the Night's I wish for this more than anything,I wish for Release Set my Pain free,Release me Tonight!... "Pieace back my Broken Heart,Just like a puzzle" I'd rather feel nothing,Instead of this Pain I'm sick of these feelings,I'd rather be Numb again I wish that I was Blind,So I wouldn't have to see anything I'd rather freeze,Than take this fake warmth!... "Wipe that Fake smile off of your Face! It's all so Wrong!" Numb,I don't want to feel anything at all Silence,I wish to hear it nomore Tear's,I'm Cryin and i'm Diein on the inside Blind,I can't stand the sight of you anymore!... "Shut your eyes and dive into the Darkness,Tonight!" Angel's come to me,Take me away.Far away Capture my Heart,Now tear it apart! Into pieace's I don't want to feel anymore,I want to be Numb again Freeze my Belief's and Destroy my Emotion's Tonight!... "Destroy all of me,Take it all away.Take the Pain away" I can't be tied down to this place,Nomore Blood pounding in my ear's,I'm shakeing in Fear Break me into,So now we can be through Let me escape this place,Help me run away again!... "Here's the start,Now tear me all apart" It's over,it's over.The Angel's have come I hear them whispering to me,To believe It's time for it to all go away,I'm Numb once again A bitter sweet smile is on my Face,As I pull the Triger!... "This Is My Release."...
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Nov 16, 2006, 10:32 PM
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| Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,326 | Re: Twisted Release That was a very good song sis. It had alot of dark emotions in it which made it so interesting. You have really done a great job. I look forward to reading more.
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Nov 16, 2006, 10:39 PM
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: Twisted Release Thank you sooo very much sis *hugs* I was sooo worried that I may have lost my touch with writting and all lol.But i'm glad that you like it.
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Nov 17, 2006, 04:02 AM
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Credits: 3,202 | Re: Twisted Release very awesome song sis you always know how to put yur feeling inot words i loved this one and the feeling are really intense i cant wait to read another one . |
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Nov 17, 2006, 07:19 AM
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: Twisted Release Yay! Hey Angel awesome song and thanks for making me wait so long to read it! lol! You have and awesome gift and I love everyone of your songs! Angel You ROCK!!!!  I don't know if you saw my poem Writer's Ambition, but I'm still trying to write a song, because you dared me to! Keep it up Angel! Your Loyal Fan!
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Nov 17, 2006, 11:31 PM
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: Twisted Release @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you so much big bro *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked this 1 so much. @ BuleFox1-Thank you sooo much Fox *hugs* And sorry for the long wait.I had writer's block really bad lol.But i'm so happy that you liked it. @ Nettles-Thank you sooo much Nettles *hugs* I'm glad that you loved it. And this 1 took me 2 weeks 2 get it fully done lol.Writer's block is truly a evil thing lol. Hopefully my next song wont take me as long lol.
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Nov 19, 2006, 09:11 AM
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: Twisted Release Either way Angel if you did have writer's block you wrote a really awesome song! Hey maybe someday I'll get to sing it for you! [hugs]
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