Hello again, me and my brother Dark Wolf, wanted to put up another so here it goes.
(HK) My only brother
How come you ain't sad?
Is it our mother?
Why are you mad?
We know what she done
She lied and steal
She neglected us
I know how you feel
(DW) She stolen everything
Always from me
She gave's me lies
That I couldn't see
She ain't worthy
Never to be trusted
Only one day I hope
She get busted
One thing I say
"I hope you burn"
Almost everyday
She never learn
(HK) Hey hey mother
Why you hurted us?
We were your son's
You had our trust
You could have told us
Instead you lied to me
Look what you done
I want you to leave
Boy that's some harsh things to say about your mom,but I guess if my mom was like that I wouldn't like her much either. I'm fortunate enough to have a great mom so I never have to worry about her doing me like that. Good poem by the way so keep the good job you're doing and I look forward to reading more.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
im glad you two decided to try your poems this way again. great work!! such anger and betrayl felt, again great work.
eh, thank you CB and M, pretty much found out that our mom was lying to us this whole time and how she stole things from us and sold them to other people, thanks for the support for this poem.
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