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    Two Brothers (2)

    Hello again, me and my brother Dark Wolf, wanted to put up another so here it goes.

    (HK) My only brother
    How come you ain't sad?
    Is it our mother?
    Why are you mad?

    We know what she done
    She lied and steal
    She neglected us
    I know how you feel

    (DW) She stolen everything
    Always from me
    She gave's me lies
    That I couldn't see

    She ain't worthy
    Never to be trusted
    Only one day I hope
    She get busted

    One thing I say
    "I hope you burn"
    Almost everyday
    She never learn

    (HK) Hey hey mother
    Why you hurted us?
    We were your son's
    You had our trust

    You could have told us
    Instead you lied to me
    Look what you done
    I want you to leave

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    Re: Two Brothers (2)

    Boy that's some harsh things to say about your mom,but I guess if my mom was like that I wouldn't like her much either. I'm fortunate enough to have a great mom so I never have to worry about her doing me like that. Good poem by the way so keep the good job you're doing and I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: Two Brothers (2)

    im glad you two decided to try your poems this way again. great work!! such anger and betrayl felt, again great work.

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    Re: Two Brothers (2)

    eh, thank you CB and M, pretty much found out that our mom was lying to us this whole time and how she stole things from us and sold them to other people, thanks for the support for this poem.

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