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Reply With QuoteIf it's one of your worst poems then your others must be gold! So sad yet I loved it so much! This has happened to me before! It was excellent hope to see more!^^
You said i was the one
the one you'd ever love.
You said you'd stop cheatin
but yet I saw you
with the girl you cheatin on me with last week.
your just a two face liar.
you come home smelling like sex
telling me "baby it's nothing"
You keep telling me these lies
yet I still believe them.
Whats with you why I still keep you
Why is it that I still love you.
is it your smile, your eyes, the way your hair blows in the wind?
No its none of that.
Its because you said you'd stop cheatin.
now im done, your lies are fading.
my heart is healing.
your just a two face liar
this is one of my worst poems by the way.
IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
If it's one of your worst poems then your others must be gold! So sad yet I loved it so much! This has happened to me before! It was excellent hope to see more!^^
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I don't think this is your worst,it's actually vise versa,right?
Because I find this poem to be quite good^^
First of all,the title REALLY caught my attentions,lol.
Also besides good,it was very deep and emotional.(well in my opinion)
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
too much going on in a relationship..
to much emotion in it..
i like it though..
thnx so much. that means alot to me, Akura13, Seirika and deidre_the_goddess.
Hope you like my future poems!!!
IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
This is an amazing poem!!!! And this can't be your worst poem!!! If it is then your others are just so AWESOME THEN!!!!!! Like what Akura said! I agree with her as well! So GO GO GO YOU!!!! I just love it so I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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