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    Two hearts One Beat

    Two heart one Beat


    Somewhere there’s a heart destined to fly beyond limits
    Hidden beneath the endless clouds of broken dreams
    He struggles to find that perfect love untouched by time
    Wondering if another beats like his in this unshielded society


    As hope begins to fade out of life’s miserable existence
    He realizes the only things that can be held onto are dreams
    Broken promises plague his pure heart as he continues to wait
    Uncertain of what may traverse a princes fallowed life


    Continuing through a life that has been forced to exist
    Hope emerges through the endless clouds of despair
    A pure heart beating as wildly as the wind appears
    She’s full of dreams and determination to succeed

    Finally a princess emerges in the ever changing world
    With a heart that is undaunted by vicious lies and grief
    Now knowing she’s the one he’s been longing for
    Two hearts can now coincide together as one beat.



    What's up AO? It's BlueFox1, it's been a while since I wrote a poem, but I was inspired to write this for someone who has truly touched my heart. I hope that you will critique and comments on this poem so that I can once again find my poetic groove.

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    Re: Two hearts One Beat

    (OMG ur alive?! J/K lol) As for ur newest piece....it's wonderful!!! Fox u have outdone urself!!! So much emotion!! It was very moving, I loved it!! It sure has been a long time since ur last poem, it's nice 2 see ur work once again. Please keep writting!! If the world lost such a great writer it'd be so sad, as would I. Once again this is a wondeful/amazing piece of art!!
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    Re: Two hearts One Beat

    wow, i really do like this, excellent =]
    I look forward to reading more of your stuff
    Last edited by Kool2bchilln; May 24, 2008 at 12:55 AM.

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    Re: Two hearts One Beat

    Very sweet poem bro! It makes you feel all warm inside knowing that someone can touch your heart like that. Great job!
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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