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    Two lifes taken away...

    So this is inspired by real life... A little boy was killed here (caught in crossfire) in Lonodon like a week ago (I'm bad at names AND dates- sorry) and the papers still write about it...
    A couple of days later a whole family was killed (police thinks it was with an intention) and guess how much they talked about that?
    Not much...
    So this is to show how I feel about it...

    On a street in a big city
    A little boy was shot dead in the back of his head
    Just a moment and he’s gone-
    How little it takes for a man to take a life

    Just a couple of mieles away
    My love fights for his life
    I’m holding his hand,
    I’m trying to stoop the blood-
    Trying to stop his life
    From flowing away

    He’s grunting and pressing my hand hard
    Trying to ease the pain
    His eyes looking painfully at me
    Still worrying only about me
    When it’s almost the end..

    The boy’s parents just found out
    And so did the press
    They’re pinting the first papers
    While I’m sitting in the waiting room

    It seems like forever
    I’m clinching to my last hope
    Untill they come...
    No words were needed

    They’re searching for the boy’s killer
    Rising everyone to their feet
    While I’m sitting in the police station
    Trying to write a statement

    His parents are moaning
    Well so am I
    But his death seems less important to you…
    Maybe just because he’s not a fan of that football team
    Or maybe ‘cause he’s not a little child
    And should have taken care
    Or maybe ‘cause he had less friends
    Or his life was just too simple…

    They have a big funeral
    In the local city cathedral
    Many people have come today
    Dressed in bright as the mother said
    They’re moaning for their son
    I’m moaning for my everything
    I have nothing left to live for
    But who in the hell cares?!

    Another big article
    “He will be remembered.”
    I laugh and cry at the time
    I don’t understand…

    A boy caught in the crossfire
    And a man killed with intention
    Two lives taken away
    Only one good enough to talk about

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Two lifes taken away...

    wow.. ^^

    What a way to convey ur feelings and such a hard theme u picked on.. lol ^^ good job.. ^^ keep up the good work there

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    Re: Two lifes taken away...

    This made me tear up. Just to sit and feel the reality in this... To get a realization of how quickly someone can dissapear...
    ... Not Ever Again...

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