Great poem sheep-san!!!! I love it!!! But, it is very sad.
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Baa~ ... Sorry for posting a lame.. long-winded poem... ^^lll
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All there is around me,
All the people sees me,
What makes my presence so known?
It's not like that there is something I own.
For I am so alone.
In the city I walk,
For countless minutes I talk,
To no one by my side.
I'm so lame,
Yet I have the fame,
Still it's such a shame,
Well, guess it's just a game.
Walls I leaned on,
Falls somewhere deep in my mind,
Why can't I stop thinking so much?
About wanting that loving touch.
For I have never had a friend,
Whom I can live till the end.
It's like something gold,
that it shoudn't be sold,
Even if it gets old,
Unless I am cold.
As I pass by glasses with my reflections,
I thought I saw myself smiling,
But all I can really see is the other side of someone else's emotions,
In a table for two, cuddling with one another,
My face and image begins to blur as the smiles of others widens,
they both are having a good time, while I was craving for such lime.
So off I continue to wander in the city that I walk,
For many days I talk,
Only to strengthen my will,
so that someday I'll get the thrill.
As I pass by more reflections,
Caught in between 2 mirrors,
The one behind me has a crystal clear reflection of me,
still alone for the crowd moves fast and faceless they are.
The mirror reflecting me the future,
is the slow pace of the people,
and my face in distortion.
My future may not exist.
I'm really so lame,
Yet I think I have the fame,
Still it's really such a shame,
Well, guess it's just a game.
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yes.. it has.. no title.... yet~
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Last edited by Aya-kun; Aug 23, 2006 at 10:58 PM.
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Great poem sheep-san!!!! I love it!!! But, it is very sad.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
I like you poem Aya-kun!! Keep it up!!
♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
It is a very beautiful poem, yet very sad...I love the reflections part, seeing yourself in this world, where people walk by faceless...Great poem Aya kun...keep it up please.
If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life
As I pass by glasses with my reflections,
I thought I saw myself smiling,
But all I can really see is the other side of someone else's emotions,
In a table for two, cuddling with one another,
My face and image begins to blur as the smiles of others widens,
they both are having a good time, while I was craving for such lime.
this part was what i liked because of how everyone
goes through this the craving and wanting its never ending cycle
that leads to happiness wich you will find or will find you
oneday. i loved this poem alot thanks for posting it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
m(_ _)m *bows extremely low and humble*
I aprreciate the few of your supports. I'm so oblige.
baa.. thank you.
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Si fantastico is like love and sadness in the same time.
weee muy bien!![]()
perdoname michelle!
I'm not much of a poem person but this I like.![]()
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It really "gets" to you y'know? Its so...emotional(?) I dont know if that'd be the appropriate term or not...@_@ Sorry
I love it, its a great poem.
->:Be descriptive in your posts or its like you didnt post at all:<-
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