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    Newbie Nao Chan may be famous one day Nao Chan may be famous one day Nao Chan's Avatar
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    really great poem aya kun ^^ i loved it very much
    really sad
    and i really liked the reflection part as many people did ^.^




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    (>_<), *cries* Oh thank you~! Nao-chan, Shinku-san, minna~!

    *collapses and dies* (x_x) baa.... If only I am made without feelings..
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    If only I was too......Trust me.......We can relate on plenty of levels.....Good poem.........I could see it..........Your lonliness........been there.....5 outta 7 days.

    Don't you just hate reality???
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
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    Quote Originally Posted by HieisLove
    I like you poem Aya-kun!! Keep it up!!
    HieisLove, please type up short posts like these. Read the rules under the poetry area. If you like the poem, tell us why and what is it that you like.
    Quote Originally Posted by Lord of Chaos
    GROUP HUG!!!!!!!! XD *hugs taurus and Aya-kun* ahahaha XD
    And, no spam, buddy.

    Next time, infraction will be given, so watch it folks.

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    Here I am!! Please note, I came here under my own influence and will.... Sheep did not force me in anyway. *Ahem*
    Haha, kidding...... Seriously. O_O

    Anyhow, I really enjoyed the use of technique in this poem. Especially the rhymes present in every 2nd Stanza. (What is the name for that technique?). Forgive me.. my english sucks!

    Also the meaning behind the poem is very nicely potrayed. A sense of lonliness, sorrow and a yearning for a more satisfying place in life/society. Am I right? O_O

    Closing with Reese's favourite quote :
    Walls I leaned on,
    Falls somewhere deep in my mind,
    Why can't I stop thinking so much?
    About wanting that loving touch.
    For I have never had a friend,
    Whom I can live till the end.
    Great poem Aya-kun. ^_^ Put it on your Bloggy. ^^

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