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    Ugly Cars on the Highway

    I need to know somethin'.
    When I say "keep it real,"
    why do you start buggin'?
    I'll say straight to your
    face, "Yo! Quit frontin'"
    If it weren't for me, heh,
    you would be nothin'.

    Take a hike, 'cuz you bother me.
    You're all talk just like your father be.
    I'm the highway, and you're just
    another random ugly car to me.
    And you're tank is running lower than
    it oughta be... Hmm...

    You're like a clot in someone's artery.
    'Cuz you're killin' me with your clownery.
    Yes, it's a word, man--are you doubting me?!
    I curse your name from Duluth to Albany!!
    Don't f***ing shout at me!!!

    I'm as calm as I oughta be.
    You gotta work on tryin' harder, G.
    'Cuz, you'll never reach the level of
    that man named Spriggity--I'm the highway,
    and you're just another random ugly car to me.
    C'mon now, it's not hard to see... You bother me!


    **I know the structure is a bit iffy, but I hope that you all will like it either way. ^_^**


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    Re: Ugly Cars on the Highway

    I can almost imagine a rapper rapping these words to an awesome beat...........
    the words are absolutely amazing and the rhythm in unique.....does not flow in a traditional way......
    Great job!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: Ugly Cars on the Highway

    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    I can almost imagine a rapper rapping these words to an awesome beat...........
    the words are absolutely amazing and the rhythm in unique.....does not flow in a traditional way......
    Great job!!!!!
    Yeah, that's what I was goin' for. I didn't want this poem to sound too... (What's the word I'm lookin' for?) ...Conventional. So, I figured I'd try my hand at writing like a rapper again. ^_^

    I'm glad that it actually worked out and that you actually liked it!


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