um here are 2 of my poems please tell me is u like

i wrote this

WHY

Why do people live...
why do people die...
has my whole life been a lie.


At first i was happy,
but now i wana die.
Has my whole life been a lie.

All i wanted to do was make her happy.
Now i only ask why.

Why did i say it.
Why will i die.
Why do i persest to lie.

I love you,
wont you please
love me too.

When will i die,
my whole life has just been 1 big lie.

I wish i could make her happy
instead of just letting her cry!!!

Why do we have to die?!?

Im sorry i really am
wont you please lend me a hand
and tell me what i need to do.
I said im sorry,
please understand.

Will i always have to ask why.
Why was i created.
Was it
To live...
To die...

WHY


i didnt writ this 1 but i found it lol hopwe u like

How many angels more need to cry,
how long will it be, before I die,
why do i feel the cold,
is it time to sing a farewell to my soul....

Long has it been,
since me tears have been seen,
long since I have found someone to hold,
is it time to sing a farewell to my soul...

Destination unnamed I have searched,
prayers I had to say in devil's church
time is ripe for memories to unfold,
its time I sing a farewell to my soul..
Let go of my hand, I need to fly,
I dont want to stay, where would I..
my body and mind is no more whole..
its time to sing a farewell to my soul...

I have always hidden my own feelings
long since my tears have been seen.
It has been so long since I could tell someone what I feel..

I feel unwanted is it time for me to sing a farewell to my REAL SELF....

Good Bye....

Are you submitting these for Poem of the Week (in which case you need to choose one and title the thread with "poem title {date}")? Or should these just be in the normal Poems forum?

This poem is so catchy in a way. I like the part where you question yourself. I love reading this over and over again. It reminds me of me a bit. Well thats just crazy. I hope to see more in the future! I know more other people will like it as well.:D:

I see no.. Evidence that you wish to submit this to the Poem of the Week. If you do wish to submit one a day? Then pm either me, chiefblackhammer, or soldat of life.

I will be moving this otherwise.